Guardian of Time: Chapter II
And not only that, but every timeline that came from the alpha, which easily numbered in the millions, if not billions, had also been irreversibly altered, so that now there were two races of humanoid creatures in the alpha timeline, a rewritten history that
Baseball in Winter 2 (redux)
#2 of baseball in winter (redux) the continuation of baseball in winter, the rewritten version. i'm rewriting the this story to get back in the mindset of writing! :3 ciyter servayed the lunch room, checking each of the tables to find his friends.
I, Dacien -- Chapter Twenty: Displacement -- CORRECTED CANONICAL VERSION
#21 of i, dacien rewritten version of chapter twenty. the older version remains available. in which chelm comes to grip with a number of strange truths. # i, dacien ###### a story by onyx tao © 2012 onyx tao [!
Autumn Woods - Chapter Eleven
I renamed that character but that scene with the character will be completely rewritten to remove the character. other old real world reference still exist throughout the story. and this might be the last chapter to be uploaded.
The Battle for Arc
#1 of the odds against okay, here it is, the new, rewritten edition of the battle for arc. i hope you enjoy it.
Strong Wolf Chronicles part 6 - Unidentified
"eventually, the genetic code chris got from me will be completely rewritten with that of the people and pokemon he interacts with, but unless he purposefully gives himself bad dna, he'll be fine.
The Warrior's Dove: Part 1 End
I can: a) start rewriting all of part i accordingly after the intermission or b) stop screwing with the writing style and start part ii (hence everything rewritten at the end of all the parts) or i guess the third option: c) fuck the project, it sucks that
Counter Earth Chronicles Fallen Empire Chapter 96: Each Of Us Is More Than The Worst Thing We Have Ever Done (The Dawn Of Civilization Part III)
It is being rewritten!" mara exclaimed as the five prepared to touch down. "we did it!" \*splash\* the quintette landed in marsh. “everyone ok?" sir ram asked. “no and i don't think i will ever be again."
Chapter One - Little Black Disk
I must have rewritten sections of it three times or more, trying to get it to a peak story. i'm not much of a writer, i admit, but i do try -- i've basically poured everything i've got into it, and hopefully it works out to improve what i've got.
Through Hell [10]
A similar scene happened in the last draft, but considering i've changed motivations and backstories, this chapter had to be completely rewritten as well. still, the whole chapter was two people just...talking. i hope it wasn't too dry haha.
Salaceon Tales
Though, hell if i really know what's going on outside my little hometown... the name is not important, hell none of the names of the towns in salaceon are important...mostly because i can't ever remember them (remember that these were rewritten multiple times
An Unlikely Friendship
#2 of the odds against and here is the second part of the odds against, rewritten as was the first. again, i hope you enjoy it.