The Moon Didn't Lie (Otherwise Untitled)
Frost was gradually freezing to the inside of the windows as he looked over into the passenger seat, a shimmering moonlight illuminating the car's keys, his cell phone, and the phone's battery each neatly separated but at hand if desired.
Heart of Ice Ch.10
The grass was neatly trimmed and was the perfect shade of green, the kind of grass i wished my house had. there wasn't a single weed in their lawn as i gawked at how amazing it looked. "your neighbors must be jealous of your lawn!
An Affliction of the Heart
His garden: neat, tended, perfect. his stew, apparently home-cooked. that fact that he lived at the base of the mountain and not in the barracks. and then all the pieces neatly fit together in kuno's mind.
Emotional Support Human
It took some hard work, but now everything is neatly packed away, and her home looks significantly brighter than when i first arrived. however, the real challenge lies ahead. we can’t just leave these bags here; there’s only one place they can go.
The Raging Hounds Book 1 Epilogue
The skunk placed the envelope neatly in front of the lord-general, snapped another salute and spun around on his heels in a parade ground perfect motion, marching just as briskly out as he had entered.
Unicorn's Destiny: Chapter 8
He was wearing a blanket as well, a neat one just like ben, with the trim done to match the decorations of the dining room so they wouldn't stand out.
Wolf Brother, Prologue and Chapter 1
"this looks neat" tj said and opened the book.
Prologue: Troubled Dreams
Through the canopy (and cockpit displays), the pilot saw the enemy spin and whirl, almost impossible to follow as it neatly dodged every single blast of bright red fired upon it, while the pilot's craft moved just as quick, instinctively dipping and rolling
Through the years part 1
He grabbed the neatly folded duffel bag from the closet and opened it up, and slowly began to gather his gear. first the sleeping bag and pillow, he knew he would be staying there overnight.
Read Harry Potter, the Aenid of our times: Srsly (4 real!)
This also applies to style - if you think hemmingway is it, write neat uncluttered prose all the time and never experiment with alternatives, that's all you'll be able to write. you need to branch out.
Surviving Solitude Part 5
To my surprise, the room was very neat. a bed went along the back wall, with two pillows, a teal comforter, and two night tables on either side. there was a dresser and a desk opposite of the door had a small stack of books, some pens, and a lamp.
The Fast and the Fat
He blew straight past three cars before they reached the first corner, then slid neatly between the wall and a fourth as they rounded the bend.