Words
Also, looking for an editor, or criticism. or both. feel free to comment with a brutally honest opinion. conversation the sound of vehicles on the freeway, just close enough to recognize but distant enough to not catch anyone's attention.
About: Shyness
Should i not be so offended and scared by criticism ? should i stop comparing myself to others ? should i stop trying to please everybody ? should i stop living for others' approval ? should i stop feeling myself so guilty for no reason ?
My Dreams are in Stories
Comments and constructive criticism are, as always, very much welcome. :) -- my dreams are in stories -- my dreams become stories, all from my mind, of dragons and wizards, each sword is drawn. fantasy epics like no other kind. "humble beginnings?
The evening
critics are appreciated. it was 6 in the evening. hindenburg's eco-system began their daily turn-over. the orange sky was fading fast, drew nearer and nearer to the half-rounded ruby red sun as time ticked by.
A Death Knight's Tale
I am open to criticism, and how to make this story better. thank you! pain. misery. death. anger. hatred. this is what she woke up to... the first thing she saw? darkness. she could feel hard stone underneath her. cold. seeping into her bones.
Piano Keys and Heart Strings
"i think you're being too modest darius," he said almost critically. "this is some powerful stuff; how did you even come up with this!?"
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
He was choking, the impact severely damaged his chest, having critical consequences on the flareons breathing. revy didn't hesitate or think, she simply ran to help. "bull! are you alright?!!" she asked. the flareon couldn't answer.
Hell Jumpers
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
All Good Things, Chapter 1
The beaver lifts a brow, resting an elbow on the counter and gazing up at caleb with a critical eye. "you're practically bubbly." "oh, he always is, didn't you know?"
Furry Little Secret (ch.1)
Oh and please it's constructive criticism, no flamers, no bashers - yes, there is a difference. constructive criticism: arigato! flamers/bashers: sayona**
The Other Side Ch 3
Also, i want to give a huge thanks to arcane reno for giving me some really good constructive criticism.
Mewtwo and Lucario
And please criticize me if you dislike the story! i need to become a better writer and criticizing is one of the only ways for me to get better. oh, and there may be a second part. still debating it with myself.** _