About: Shyness
Should i not be so offended and scared by criticism ? should i stop comparing myself to others ? should i stop trying to please everybody ? should i stop living for others' approval ? should i stop feeling myself so guilty for no reason ?
Words
Also, looking for an editor, or criticism. or both. feel free to comment with a brutally honest opinion. conversation the sound of vehicles on the freeway, just close enough to recognize but distant enough to not catch anyone's attention.
The evening
critics are appreciated. it was 6 in the evening. hindenburg's eco-system began their daily turn-over. the orange sky was fading fast, drew nearer and nearer to the half-rounded ruby red sun as time ticked by.
A Death Knight's Tale
I am open to criticism, and how to make this story better. thank you! pain. misery. death. anger. hatred. this is what she woke up to... the first thing she saw? darkness. she could feel hard stone underneath her. cold. seeping into her bones.
My Dreams are in Stories
Comments and constructive criticism are, as always, very much welcome. :) -- my dreams are in stories -- my dreams become stories, all from my mind, of dragons and wizards, each sword is drawn. fantasy epics like no other kind. "humble beginnings?
Love in Being Different: Ch. 1
But be nice about, i'd love constructive criticism, but i don't handle hurtful criticism very well. let me know what you furs think! ~enjoy!
Experiment 261 Chapter 8
One of my colleagues had been critically injured, and is in a critical but stable condition in hospital. we...have to be prepared for the possibility that we may not find them again...they are former military.
The Other Side Ch 3
Also, i want to give a huge thanks to arcane reno for giving me some really good constructive criticism.
A previous verson of my story idea, please not this is a beta version of my story line written long ago
Her family wasent a ordinary family her father a don of a powerful growing mafia, he mother was gunned down a two ago and was put in critical condition today was the last day she she would have to go into sugery to save her life
All's Fair - Part 2
Your votes/comments/criticisms are welcome. thanks!
Piano Keys and Heart Strings
"i think you're being too modest darius," he said almost critically. "this is some powerful stuff; how did you even come up with this!?"
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
He was choking, the impact severely damaged his chest, having critical consequences on the flareons breathing. revy didn't hesitate or think, she simply ran to help. "bull! are you alright?!!" she asked. the flareon couldn't answer.