Unexpected Exploration (part 1)
I do not take hard criticism very well. hello! my name is crytus! i'm a bright orange fox anthro with very blue eyes. despite my essentric colours, i'm actually quite nervous and shy. i don't have a lot of friends, but the one i do have's name is takis.
The Mute - Chapter 1: When I met Kyle
But tell me what you think and criticism much appreciated. this story is about a young wolf who can't speak, and just happens to be very gay.
Tangled Vines - Prologue
I only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite. story, characters, and related art © 2016 ronald j. lebeck (that's me).
Chapter Thirteen
Don't forget leave a comment, feedback, and criticism. enjoy! ian p.o.v _i can't believe they would send her to retrieve me!
The Mission of Voyager 3
After a few moments of critical thinking, she knew what had to be done. "cadet myles. turn off all safety procedures on our fuel reserves. take us to the comet, and crash into the side of it."
Goodbye, Tomorrow; Chapter One: City of Lights, City of Death
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Through the years part 1
The end i'm open to comments and constructive criticism. hope you enjoyed the story!!
Dreams of Shackles
:d please comment, criticisms are fine... in fact they are welcome! this isnt n. korea, i wont shoot you for criticizing me, i need criticism to improve. and i very much want to improve. so comment and criticize at you leasure.
Furry Little Secret (ch.1)
Oh and please it's constructive criticism, no flamers, no bashers - yes, there is a difference. constructive criticism: arigato! flamers/bashers: sayona**
Emotional Support Wolf
She had gotten up from the couch and was ready to give carl some of her pointed criticism on punctuality, except this had caught her off guard. "it's not a wolf," said tom turning, trying to still process. "it's not a wolf, right?" he said to his son.
Finding Myself
Constructive criticism is welcome and the only flames i want to see are the kindles of love between these two dragons. when i first allowed my eyes to gaze upon him, it was like i viewed into a mirror.
The Princess' Distraction
Maeglyn asked critically. from where she had put me in the cage i could see the smile on her leonine features, "oh i am sure things will be just fine dear."