the Galar Chronicle - the Challenge Begins [chapter 3]
Wooloo lands 2 powerful kicks on cinder, the last kick dealing critical damage and sent her flying before she lands in front of danimus. **danimus:** cinder! cinder, though battered, was able to get on one knee.
A Silent Soul- Chapter 1
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Chapter Thirteen
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Poem #11: Words
#11 of poetry critical thinking about human use and connotation of words themselves. wrote it in (not for) english class junior year. _words_ what are words written across the page? what emotions are written into these words?
Poem #9: The Question Why
#9 of poetry a poem about critical thinking in regards to the why of life, and all its contradictions.
For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul
You are strong within, my heart know that, forever, i'll be your guard construcitve criticism appreciated. however remember, this was my first poem ever so don't tear me into pieces because it is bad or something.
leave me be. poem
I don't half to take your criticism. because your hypocrisy is bigger than the usa. you just drive me to the brink to where i want to brake your face. if you can't handle this fate then change it your way.
Men vs Women
Women criticize unfairly. a man is the boss. a woman is just bossy. men are confident. a woman is opinionated and pushy. men are leaders. women need to be led. men speak the truth. women unfairly accuse the "innocent."
Poem #19: Yo Pense (I Thought)
Its about reflection and critical thinking of the world around us. i've included the english translation.
Friends, Lovers, Partners ~ Prologue
As this is my first submission, and comments and criticism are welcome. vote or fave if it pleases you to do so.
Dusk's Adventure day 3
\*he uses drill rush landing a critical hit\* dusk: \*he uses brutal swing on shield again landing a critical hit\* shield: \*seems nearly defeated\* okay, i give! you win... dusk: thanks, can you get up? shield: yeah.
The orphaned Riolu chapter 1
Another critical, riolu falls onto his knees and gets up riolu then tries to use hand to hand combat or paw to paw combat in this case on his opponent but the opponent dodges every time, riolu gets struck by a wing attack and it scores a critical hit, riolu's