Only the beginning
Even if i dont get enough people saying i should do it, i still might write the rest of the story, and even start again, in third person. so.... enjoy i guess, and please leave helpful comments below.
A Longing Hope
#1 of kemet's story first story i have written in third person :) the wind was warm as it danced across the desert sands. palms rustled, the hot breeze caressed kemet's fur, and she sighed.
Ailee and Jolee [<1k words]
I randomly rolled for 4 characters to be used, and for the story to be in present tense, and in third person. ailee rolled over, her short little nose sticking out from underneath her onto the couch.
He Won't Be [collective paragraphs about a dog and hedgehog]
But to keep at a third person view i cannot oblige him. it breaks my own heart to watch as he leaves; one last heartbroken gaze comes from him as he looks back to her, and the other one, then he leaves. he won't come back anymore.
Taking a Step Back
\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ so i sit there, watching my own life pass me by. seeing things from other peoples views. seeing my self in third person.
J'nari the Brute of Elsweyr
Due in part to this, j'nari doesn't boast the third-person way of speaking that most khajiit have. the reason for this tendancy amongst most khajiit, is that our language has no word to refer to oneself.
Filthy: Chapter 4
**authors note: as now, i'll be writing in third person mode!
the war he calls it
Second story this time third person and less confusing _journal entry 210:_ _ my grandfather would be proud of me. i protected all i could of my family and made it to safety.
RP Game: Kinetic Roulette!
I recommend having a third person as a referee though like your local dungeon master, here are the rules to this game: 1.
As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
In a novel where you're writing in what is now a popular viewpoint - close third person - you are trying to write from your character's shoulder. "john walked down the street, hating every step.
Read Harry Potter, the Aenid of our times: Srsly (4 real!)
Write something in first person, write something in third person, write something in a tangled mix, write something in a perspective nobody's heard of before. experiment. never, ever, look down on a genre as completely worthless.
Lonely Oak Chapter 6
Hands all over him prevented him from falling as he sliced the ice, pushed from behind by a third person--judging by the voice kval.