A War To Remember: Chapter One
Its kinda short and my english sucks at the moment. i'd gladly take any constructive critique. (except the bashing kind, no one likes to be bashed.) i'm native in german and english but i'd like to get my english back on track.
Soul Makossa- Part Three
The payment from his jobs as an english tutor and as a musician in new york would pay more than his job as a canner. plus, it was actually skilled work that required effort.
Dustin & Kai: Chp 1
It was english so there was no hurry. five minutes later he arrived, took a seat and slumped onto his desk for his usual english period nap. "kai! wake the hell up and do your bloody work!"
iii. A Friend in Need (6~15~07)
The shopping itself went without much trouble; she could read english perfectly well. but the problem started when she got to the cashier.
Incomplete Life Portrait
(and although come to dust and burn down the tower is written in us english when in simon's point of view, i wrote incomplete life portrait in uk english since simon's originally from england.)
Riku: Chapter 2
All the english letters had the local equivalent under it, then more pages down simple words, phrases, etcetera. i quickly read threw the alphabetized list of phrases, and found what i was looking for.
A Letter Home
The crew was always polite to me, however, even when i stumbled over my english. most of my time on ship was spent in my small cabin, brushing up on my english, making sketches and looking over maps of vancouver and chicago.
Dartmouth Part Two: Dartmouth High School
I was deep into an essay about myself that i had due for english, when the phone started ringing. i figured i'd just let the answering machine get it.
Whispers of the Frostbound
Although english is my second language and i had no formal education in it, i was undeterred; any errors that may remain are a testament to my self-taught knowledge.
thr return
'till next english lesson maybe" she called out vanishing on the bus. (lol this is just me remembering yr 10 in my good old history class)
A Dragon's Diary 09.06 (Heartbreak)
I didn't get late for class though i woke up late, and the advanced english class, a new subject for me, was very easy and fun for me. the professor praised me, though it was only the first day.
Jurash "goju" Sulfam
english is not my native language, so i need to improve my skill in it. if you see a problem with the text like a strange turn of phrase, an invalid verb usage or just a vocabulary problem/improvement, feel free to leave a comment, i need it.