Werewolf Tale II - Chapter 22 - Ask And Recieve
Wednesday, October 26th, 2011 Moon Phase - New Alex second-guessed his choice of answer for a few seconds after hearing that; Shane's forceful stare soon broke him away from where he felt safest, and he followed them towards the hallway on the left...
Werewolf Tale II - Chapter 21 - Straightening The Record
Sunday, October 23rd, 2011 Moon Phase - Waning Crescent After Shane departed a few minutes later, Alex pulled out his phone and held it for a moment. Had Marcus already told Catherine and Nathan about what happened? As he wondered, something akin to...
First Draft of First Story
(Some things are not in italics because it did not transfer from Word Processor to this, so forgive me. And also, the things IN italics that have awesome names are in Latin if you care enough to look it up. The story is probably confusing right now, so...
The Longest Fall - Prologue (First Draft)
The Longest Fall Prologue (c) Cederwyn Whitefurr (aka: Anthony Wain) May, 2010 All Rights Reserved After a millennium of watching and hoping, finally, the Gods could watch no more; seeing their wondrous creations turn on each other with...
Yedmichi's Tail (first draft) Prologue
This is the start of an Idea thats started running in my head since starting to talk with my best friend, Arbon, again after nearly a year. Its the origan story of my furson's incubus clan leader. If I get good comment and help refining my writting...
pieces first draft 7/24/12
Pieces Pieces of my heart, Pieces of my soul, Gift of my heart, Smashed to pieces, Picking up what's left, A soul is only as big as a heart to hold it, Pieces of my soul falling away, Heart broken again and again, till the pieces are to small to find,...
Update
#4 of first draft the massachusetts time traveler this is only my first draft to get all my idea's out in writing so it's probably gonna be crappy as it's only three chapter's
i am wyrm (first draft, 10/15/11)
My blood is balefire, My heads are many, My flesh is poison, My mind is hate, My heart is oblivion, My soul is corruption, I am the destruction of all, The end of times, The crash of the heavens, The death of the world, I am apocalypse incarnate, I am...
Section 1: The Chakat Who Folded Hirself (First Draft)
#2 of works in progress this is my first draft for section 1 of the new version of the chakat who folded hirself. this section is pg, maybe even g, but the whole story is planned to have a max rating of pg13.
Fears of a Newbie Writer
The fwg liked the first draft, hopefully you'll like the "polished" one. enjoy and have a nice day. **fears of a newbie writer** i'm scared of trying to be a writer. i'm scared cause i don't always believe in myself.
Editing
I used to post first drafts but then i discovered i was losing readers because they did not want to reread my material.
Scratch Post 1 - Inner Editor
Note that this works best for first drafts - i would not recommend revising using this technique. 2. ditch the tech. our typical word processors - docs, office, whatever you like writing with - are great for the final copy.