The Hunters Gather - 1
Into action with the fatal blow.
Of Fox and Wolf Chapter 4: Flowers
Rose was greatly annoyed by not having the honor of dealing the final blow. "obviously. though if you remember, we are short on time, rose. now let us depart."
I Put a Hex on You And Now You're Mine
Hex cleared his mind as he waited for the blow to come, the first blow crashing down with a bright, clear pain. as it faded the next one came, nay spacing them out to let him feel each one.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 85
Don't blow on that horn!" hezzi, his little brother, pleaded for mercy. "ander, please, don't kill my mother!" renna.
Pitch Episode 40: Tricks and Treats
It was bj who took me. but it wasn't bj, which meant it was riz. she escorted me away. there was nowhere with enough privacy to speak completely alone, but we found a corner of the room where a few drunk people laid passed out.
Writing Tips
You want to avoid being overly descriptive, as blow by blow gets old really fast. however, you also need to give your readers a good idea of what is happening.
Cinnamon 12: Warrior Spirit
Lily dodged, swinging karrdring towards its flank, a driving blow, but the beast twisted away from it then swiped at her again. she ducked and rolled and jabbed, but the blow glanced off the sheer rock wall of the pass.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 176
Ander screamed in pain and frustration, raining down blow after blow on his brother's head.
Kamen Rider Wild - Chapter 17: Wild Fang
His other fist slammed against her chest plate just as her head snapped back from the first blow.
Rengar greentext from /bara/
, it's not long before you blow your load in his maw and he greedily, messily swallows every drop like his life depends on it >he won't let go of your cock just yet and keeps sucking it like a vacuum, draining two more loads out of you >he's drunk
in the hands of a god
He thought he charged going in to deliver a final blow but as body collapsed and he fell to the ground his consciousness slipping away slowly, for him everything as moving slowly. "no... why... i was so close.
Ragefire Captive - Chapter 1 - LFG
A sense of anger, shame, despair as she struggled to avoid blow after blow, a heavy impact from the side, pain, and - nothing. as she fought her way back to full consciousness, jateej took stock of her situation.