//?A Curious Sergal: Part 6.001
A curious sergal part 5: [http://www.sofurry.com/view/377316](http://www.sofurry.com/view/377316) if anyone would like to offer ideas of where to go with it, or have any comments, critiques, or questions, i think now is the time, as i will not be
After Dark - Intro / Chapter 0
Please critique with this in mind. my first post here, too! ~t] [continued here: [after dark: chapter 1](%5c)] it's always been easier for me to be brave after dark. i don't know why. normally, you'd think the opposite was true.
Punk'd Out
A punk tf written as a birthday present for renyard2001 over at fa: it was definitely a fun write using music as a hypnotic trigger~ as always, comments and critiques are appreciated!
A Quiet Afternoon on the Normae Coast
Both hans' and freja have their critique on his form but neither care to fix it, alard's future doesn't rely on his skill with a polearm, not with how much effort hans and freja have put into preparing their family for success.
Longing
critiques or criticism in any form is always welcomed the beast drew closer. it's size was mammoth, every step resonating a loud thud and crushing rustle from the grass pounded by it's feet.
Bomb Shelter
critique is welcome, but be gentle. **chapter two - bomb shelter** ** ** the project was about as exciting as could be expected for a class outside of her major.
Thieves Chapter 1 - Flight
If you do, critique, questions and suggestions are always welcome in the comments! **thieves** chapter 1 - flight the little fox was running as fast as his paws would carry him through the snow, as he heard the tracker dogs bark behind him.
Evil Genius Ch. 1
Feel free to give constructive critique or comments. nothing spectacular happens in this chapter though unfortunately.
Vixi's Shocking Meal
Comment if you like, but please, i don't want critiques on this one either.
Disproportionate Revenge!
Here's hoping it gets a bit of attention and critique here! hey! look! rainy posts something again! this time it's vore related. my first foray into this kinda thing. if you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment! i won't bite!
Avian: A web serial
So yeah, i hope you all enjoy and please leave your critiques! alright, my first day of writing in this thing... hm, i really can't say that i know what to write.
The fruits of her labor
Special thanks to my helper, critique guy, formatter, proofer, etc: kanohaninja amongst the roots of a great tree a lone grey wolf lay with her back to the trunk.