The Start
Newer to writing, please provide constructive critique as it helps an artist grow. or let me know if you like it! it was a particularly bitter sweet day, rhajaro felt as though it would never come.
Liam and Muireann
When he was finished, he critiqued the result. not only did it say exactly what it should, he thought it was his best yet. he bundled it up, and set off for where it needed to go. once in private with ciaran, liam explained himself.
Vixi's Shocking Meal
Comment if you like, but please, i don't want critiques on this one either.
waltz into moonlight
They turn and see the instructor applausing them, so they smile a bit and bow, walking over, turning off the song and talking with them, as they talk, the instructor gives a few minor critiques and then praises them for their hard work in organizing their
Canvas and Melody - Chapter 3
#5 of canvas and melody all comments and critiques welcome, and any questions will be answered in character and henceforth canon.
Canvas and Melody - Prologue
I intend to do daily uploads until this story is finished, any and all comments and critiques are welcome!
Jamie Character Sketch
Yesterday, my friend littlebat posed a weekend writing challenge in a telegram group i'm in, and critique is optional.
Bigger, Badder... Crazier
Barbara & eddy (grey wolves)- restaurant critiques; both well known in canada. "we've visited the restaurant tommy & regina opened after the last race," barbara says, "we gave it 5 out of 5 stars." "i still think the spices were a bit much."
Project Warblade: Chapter 1
Any critique, comments, favorites, or anything else will help greatly. i'll be working on chapter two sometime tomorrow and i'd really love to know how i can improve! and yes, this was imported from my fa.
The Marked Ones - Arc 0: Chapter 1 - Before the Storm
I'm just so... tired" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ _sorry if it seems short, but like i said i'm still thinking about the details of the chapters_ _feel free to review and constructively critique =
Writer's Block
I'd like to add that i'm free to proofread, critique or write. feel free to ask. =========================================================================================== "if only i had a way to start this!!!"
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Brothers Will Be Brothers
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** "i don't need to be reminded of our pasts when enough comes to mind about it already," tyrannio snapped. "i'm well aware of both our histories enough for my understanding.