The Scent of a Lover Part 3
I have to say again if you guys think i need any writing advise or tips on my stories i will improve them. this part will be in talbains view and we learn a bit about his past. so enjoy!
Milk the Girl
I should start with something small, like some self improvement crap, then the big enchilada! money! well if i'm going to be rich i suppose i should try to become more civilized.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 1: Beginnings
I know that my father has talked about how much he likes having a strong kingdom, and how much it helps improve morale and pride, but i feel that there is more to it than just that.
All's Fair - Part 1
Please comment with your thoughts and especially constructive criticism so that i can keep improving my writing. i won't be offended, and i really love getting feedback, both on my old parts like this one and my newer stuff.
Life is hard when your diary goes missing...
But i suppose that's an improvement on my work with character development. if you've read my other stories, do you think this was an improvement as far as characters go? or would you rather me just get right into the action?
Poem #50: An Understanding
Understand what it's like to want to die to wish your life over to think no one will care if you are gone some don't understand the beauty of wondering why to question and wonder and to think until your questions lead to questions that improve
Little Wings of the Storm
Meh, not bad enough not to share; i want to improve, don't i? anyway, if you have something to say about my work, go ahead and tell me!
Kept in Suspense
Decro had specified that he wanted to improve his financial situation, physical fitness, and maximize happiness, and was willing to allow us to change his lifestyle, diet, job, behavior, and storage situation.
The Breeder
He pointed out the things that were always looked to be desired in a milktank and then the things that were needed to improve upon those things that people wanted more of in milktanks.
Basic Sponsorship
Why would i want to help you improve?" her beak parted, and i could see her thinking. when she spoke, her words were very measured.
Aftermath - The Quiet Life
I'm seeing a lot of improvement in everyone's shooting. challenges will continue through tuesday, but that is the last chance to get on the completion team before thursday's match.
Moving in
If you have any ideas for improvements, please tell, i have to improve somehow! "let's see, upstairs, downstairs, downstairs, attic, upstairs....why are there so many boxes!"