Amber Scenery
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. an amber hill on sunny day, a cooling wind to guide the way. fresh air blows through the scenery, sends shivers through the greenery.
A Child's Fears
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. mother, there's a monster hiding underneath my bed: the tentacles snake up to try and grab my head.
Adept Paws Interlude: Rea
* * * art: slatedragon edits: [ darkdragon](https://darkdragon.sofurry.com/ "darkdragon") let me know what you think!
Game Night (Part One)
#1 of game night (series) the edited first part of my new game night series.
Just another day chapter one
#1 of magi technology this is my first story and chapter and i would love to know what all of you readers think number of edits:2 vex a half dragon half raccoon yawned to awareness around eight o'clock that morning.
Tea and Empathy
"i thumbed through glover's comb-bound copy" "oaknail is right: the original edition is not the best introduction to the tribe. when i was first exposed to tribal ideas, i read the edition prior to this one." "updating the dream?"
Fera, or 'Quadruped' Kyruku
#6 of encyclopedia kyruku - 3rd edition fera, or 'quadruped' kyruku quadruped, or 'fera vulpes kyrukus' (meaning 'feral vulpine kyruku', in latin), often shortened to 'fera', are found much smaller numbers than the typical anthropomorphic kyruku, due to
The Nine Knights of Creation: Research Notes: Allies
Part of a short novel i've been working on (it's still being edited & written) over the time that the knights fought across the omniverse, helping other races and realms escape their doom, they made some allies, five to be precise.
The Nine Knights of Creation: Chapter 2: Reign of Chaos
Part of a short novel i've been working on (it's still being edited & written) over a century later, in the mortal year of 1944, the nazi party of germany has been experimenting with inter-dimensional travel, and an expedition has found their way into the
Writing Assinment: 5 min write, 5 min rewrite
Assigment: set the timer and write for 2 minutes about yout current location, then spend the next 5 minutes rewriting and editting draft: > it's almost 11:30 pm here in my room and i'm tired as hell.
Death Monologue
I'm not looking at a camera, i'm not looking, at an editing screen. i'm looking at you. i'm looking at your heart beat inside your chest. i and your eyes widen slightly, rolling slightly.
Ethan's Good Day
In the meantime, have this much shorter thing i wrote on a whim without editing or anything. * * * it was a good day. the park was truly beautiful this time of year. the sun was shining, birds were chirping, the brook was babbling.