Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed
He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...
Into the Horizon: Departure
The shields just failed and the core is seconds from going critical."
INTP Road to Self-Knowledge
The critical parent is a voice in your head that will cause you to criticize yourself and others.
"BLEU" - Me'Zelf
It came in the form of resourcefulness and critical thinking. it also awakened my selfless quality, which followed through the entire service period. i usually put my responsibilities over personal gain, though often behind the scenes out of view.
"BLEU" - Thingy
Our mindsets were hammered to be critical, adaptable, and analytical. we were also hard wired to be capable of suppressing our impulses and emotions in difficult situations.
New Beginnings Chp 3
If that was a good movie to you, you're the worst movie critic of all time." "well i don't wanna be super critical on everything like you usually are. i think one super critical person is enough." "you can never be too critical." "really? yes you can!
Fledgling Developments part 1
Many minutes of stalking came down to these critical few seconds, and success or failure would be decided right now.
Be Careful What You Wish For: Chapter I
#1 of be careful what you wish for series it is my first story, so provide some criticism! but don't be a jerk. this story is about a wolf that is into babying and diapers...not giving away too much' so you will be surprised!
A Silent Soul- Chapter 1
Feel free to leave a comment with constructive criticism, or just say if you liked it! or not! totally up to you! other than that, i think it's time to go! bye! ^\_^
ST: TDF Chapter 1
Then added, "main power plant is in critical condition. energy readings show high levels of radiation are slowly building. three hours before it reaches critical mass and self-destructs." fox sighed and shook her head. "anyone or anything aboard?"
Titanfall: blaze of glory
Titan is now at 25 percent power, core going critical. i recommend we avoid further conflict and change tactics.
Enter the Cat- Chapter 1
Jade stumbled out of the kitchen approaching the mustached critic. "hello, your jade, i mean i'm jade...welcome to hut waffles...i mean waffle hut, may i take your order."