Daily Tale 07/25&26/14: Game Day
Please point out any typos or grammatical errors if you can spot any and enjoy the read! daily tale june 25th & 26th, 2014 game day the first rays of morning sunlight shone in through a window, waking up a young canine cub.
Artist, Dreamer, Storyteller, Terror
Through trial and error, the lioness made her tapestries vibrant with both color and story stitched into it and the people loved it.
The Tunnel
I look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing. for those of you interested, this is my submission to the wordsmith awards challenge by naraki wolf.
Burdens - Chapter 45: Clear
He was not precognizant, but he could at least predict within a certain margin of error. it was tedious, but it occupied him. he felt a paw on his shoulder and everything suddenly focused.
Light
We can't allow a single error for an event as complicated at this one, neiame, as i'm sure you know." she sighed and nodded slowly. she had spent decades working to make this day happen; she would be ready for it. "continue the preparations.
Engineer (not official title [Work in Progress])
"i don't know one minute i was checking a system out with a supposed error. then as soon as i got there it suddenly slammed shut and i was trapped, thank god it jammed," joel said. "it didn't jam.
david's college days part thirty
Plugging every thing in to where it should be was easy the cables had come from david's dad's friend in a computer shop, firing it up; it started and ran normal with no error commands or any passwords needed and it was nice and quite not load or nosey
The war of metal solders
Safety protocol enable: system error//main artillery down. flash's across my eye's before eventually disappearing to a video screen. devein appeared on my scree. "great job rivian. a few more win like this and the deshoda will give in."
New Friends with No Faces
You'll probably notice this one isn't as well written and has more errors, i apologize.
The Legend of Spyro: Return of the Dragon ch.4
And i know that there will be grammar and spelling errors so if you find any it would be appreciated. i will try not to take six months to update next time. lol c u ltr
Strait from the Sales Block
Any comments and critisism are appreciated and i appollogise in advance for spelling errors and grammer. 'take your pick! any sex, any age! we have it all! if i'm lying my hat is ten feet tall!
Start for a Trainer ch 2
#3 of start for a trainer **i'm back and i'm on chapter 2 i hope this one has less errors** **--------------** **danny** --------------- while walking i found out we were in sandgem town.