Poem #50: An Understanding
Don't understand what it's like to want to die to wish your life over to think no one will care if you are gone some don't understand the beauty of wondering why to question and wonder and to think until your questions lead to questions that improve
A Bronze Rising: Smoke and Fire
Tobias had improved somewhat on the flight over here, but he still looked pale and coughed occasionally. i set him on the high stone wall and looked him directly in the eye. i had only a couple moments. "i want you to witness as i claim this territory.
My Story - Part 1
_ _i apologise if my english is not that good, i'm trying to improve. feel free to leave a comment on how i might do, or even about everything else! ^^_ _i'll catch you in the second part! ;)_
The Lost October (Novemberween)
And while i've noticed an improvement, it's clear it's not fully shaken off. so what to do about spook month? it's over and i missed the deadline i suppose...well, the simple answer is to simply make it up. and why not?
Miharra's Battle
I like to write and i want to improve so i'd really appreciate any feedback given.
The Search For Garth/Day 1
#1 of the search for garth i plan on making a series please give advice or help me improve my story "2 months later" "kate i'm home" humphery yelled but was greeted with silence.
A Transplanted Lily Shall Bloom - intro
Things didn't improve when the new kit arrived either.
Clarity - Prologue: Everyday Reality
Ever since that day roughly two years ago, i've only improved at this one.
Journeys of Time 19
Thermo optical camouflage for enhanced stealth abilities, right eye enhanced with smart targeting for improved target tracking and acquisition for sniping, also recording features and data feed to verify targets and confirmed kills."
Priyanka's Caffeinated Coffee Consumption Chaos!
Clearly the smell had not improved since the last time she had been around coffee. she blew on the coffee first to cool it off, then brought the cup to her lips and priyanka took a small sip.
With Fire in the Night: Chapter 2
Ramona worked on her speed, which continued to improve, but also improved her endurance and built her muscles right alongside azurik. her strength, even when not in her native species, was quick to emerge and plentiful.
Darkness 4: Things Fall Apart
Despite these concerns, it was obvious that slowly but surely i was improving, though both mulvaney and i knew that my progress was frustratingly slow.