The Search For Garth/Day 1
#1 of the search for garth i plan on making a series please give advice or help me improve my story "2 months later" "kate i'm home" humphery yelled but was greeted with silence.
A Transplanted Lily Shall Bloom - intro
Things didn't improve when the new kit arrived either.
The World Games Convention - Chapter 2: A letter to Dewi
#2 of the world games convention greatly looking forward to feedback of how to improve telling a story through letters!
Horns & Halos CH7
"hmmm...improvement.", malice mused, giving her slave the opium. the drow then produced a small scroll and a bag, tossing them to nisha. "procure the items listed on the scroll.", she ordered, turning on her heel.
A shy bunny
If there are any grammar mistake or improvement in content or word choices feel free to comment. :) i slowly walked towards the only light source in this basement.
Rent
I got you a little something to improve your mood" the cat smiled, giggling softly before unzipping his backpack quickly. he took out the greasy, and still warm glamburger, fully extending his arm out to hand it to the rabbit. "oh yes!
My Story - Part 1
_ _i apologise if my english is not that good, i'm trying to improve. feel free to leave a comment on how i might do, or even about everything else! ^^_ _i'll catch you in the second part! ;)_
With Fire in the Night: Chapter 2
Ramona worked on her speed, which continued to improve, but also improved her endurance and built her muscles right alongside azurik. her strength, even when not in her native species, was quick to emerge and plentiful.
Darkness 4: Things Fall Apart
Despite these concerns, it was obvious that slowly but surely i was improving, though both mulvaney and i knew that my progress was frustratingly slow.
Haunt Chapter 2: The Every Key
It has to improve the lives of those who use them." "a set of bellows that blows flames would improve my life. are you telling me we can't beat the thissids with your haunted toys?" asked the old wolf.
Resolutions - Part 1 - January
So my year wasn't off to a great start at the stroke of midnight but it's been improving. i made a new friend and i had some pretty good tea. things were looking up.
Jeremy 087; The Inner Circle
He had for some time now been at the point where he could almost see improvement on a weekly basis. alex too seemed pleased with his rapid improvement.