Downfall: Prologue and Chapter 1
After some editing to the grammar (if it was written by me, it probably wouldn't have the errors.) i posted it here. let me know what you think guys, i don't think it's bad myself.
The Tale of Mortibe from the Song of Hannari
To this the great truth replied, "truly, the gods of old have become corrupt, and sit in the high places on the tree of ages making their time in error. mortibe, yours is the task of facing the gods.
A Split Heart: Part 3
. ;) so please leave more feedback, criticism, errors, et al. so anyway, at this point in time, i have three watchers, so i hereby dedicate part 1 to xx-akiko-xx, part 2 to artic folf, and part 3 to kriffin.
Stripes, Chapter 1: New In Town
I had, indeed, been programming in circles - i should've spotted that error in seconds. "not a date, exactly," i sighed. "i'm just gonna hang out with a few new people after work. i guess i'm a bit nervous about meeting them." "i guess?"
Blood in The Snow
Sorry if there is any punctuation, grammar, or spelling errors, this is really my first time writing and i miss things a lot. if y'all like them i'll put some more out. tell me what you think!!
The Madness of Mrs. Frank
I could not afford a single error, and not an artist of the drawing kind, i was still learning to keep them straight.
Accommodations
People on the ground are telling them that something is going after them and an error counts it in as "ka-tao" and with the bearing in close, they were the first to respond.
Daily Tale 07/25&26/14: Game Day
Please point out any typos or grammatical errors if you can spot any and enjoy the read! daily tale june 25th & 26th, 2014 game day the first rays of morning sunlight shone in through a window, waking up a young canine cub.
Artist, Dreamer, Storyteller, Terror
Through trial and error, the lioness made her tapestries vibrant with both color and story stitched into it and the people loved it.
The Tunnel
I look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing. for those of you interested, this is my submission to the wordsmith awards challenge by naraki wolf.
Burdens - Chapter 45: Clear
He was not precognizant, but he could at least predict within a certain margin of error. it was tedious, but it occupied him. he felt a paw on his shoulder and everything suddenly focused.
Light
We can't allow a single error for an event as complicated at this one, neiame, as i'm sure you know." she sighed and nodded slowly. she had spent decades working to make this day happen; she would be ready for it. "continue the preparations.