Downfall: Prologue and Chapter 1
After some editing to the grammar (if it was written by me, it probably wouldn't have the errors.) i posted it here. let me know what you think guys, i don't think it's bad myself.
The Tale of Mortibe from the Song of Hannari
To this the great truth replied, "truly, the gods of old have become corrupt, and sit in the high places on the tree of ages making their time in error. mortibe, yours is the task of facing the gods.
A Split Heart: Part 3
. ;) so please leave more feedback, criticism, errors, et al. so anyway, at this point in time, i have three watchers, so i hereby dedicate part 1 to xx-akiko-xx, part 2 to artic folf, and part 3 to kriffin.
Stripes, Chapter 1: New In Town
I had, indeed, been programming in circles - i should've spotted that error in seconds. "not a date, exactly," i sighed. "i'm just gonna hang out with a few new people after work. i guess i'm a bit nervous about meeting them." "i guess?"
Mascara
She glared down the reflection blinking dully back at her, the black spot of mascara a glaring error in the expanse of what could have been perfection.
Blood in The Snow
Sorry if there is any punctuation, grammar, or spelling errors, this is really my first time writing and i miss things a lot. if y'all like them i'll put some more out. tell me what you think!!
The Ferry Ride
As part of this i gave myself only one week to finish this and i am sorry for any and all grammatical errors. if you're interested in doing the same. i would suggest going to thursday prompt's fa page.
Day 13 - Hobby
Nadiel didn't know how he had managed that first week living together, where every error could end tint those brown eyes with terror. like a bull in a china shop, he felt trapped, any move he made would lead to disaster.
The Madness of Mrs. Frank
I could not afford a single error, and not an artist of the drawing kind, i was still learning to keep them straight.
Lead Crown Contribution: Wiesen/Kesst
Frantically searching around the room for any kind of explanation for the voice and finding none wiesen even reopened the eyes of crook to see if by error he somehow only changed places with kesst.
The Story Of Shadonhess
If there are grammatical or spelling errors within, sorry... also, this is more like a summary anyways, so if your wondering why not much time was put into it... well i guess that is not a very good excuse.
Accommodations
People on the ground are telling them that something is going after them and an error counts it in as "ka-tao" and with the bearing in close, they were the first to respond.