Chapter 40
Quite a bit is getting adjusted for consistency and while there are no direct rewrites, turns out there are a lot of moments where i went, "this is how it is" and then changed it a paragraph later.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 128
Focussing solely on kiana and the dilemma of the surviving wolves was much better, and way faster, too, even though that also went through three or four rewrites before i was finally satisfied...
The Life of Half star - (Inspired by Erin Hunters Awesome Story Series Warrior Cats) - 4 - Training
At the point when i wrote this one i was in the middle of season two and when i´ve heard of the death of honeyfern, the story had grown to far away to rewrite it. sorry !!!!
Amber Silverblood: Silverpack, Chapter Twenty Four (The Real One)
She's like a blank slate, perfect for the silverblood strain to completely rewrite her dna into whatever it wanted." i looked down at my feet, the inside of my head a storm.
A Twisted Fate [1]
This is the 8th rewrite, and while i'm not happy with it completely, i've grown aware to the fact that i never will be 100% satisfied, simply because it will never be 100% perfect.
Commission: Heads of Cerberus Chapter 1
In seconds the world seemed to open up around this younger man again, sound returning, focus coming back, and the world almost rewriting itself in his mind as his mental state finally gave in to the information that was being provided and allowed it to be
Baseball in Winter 2 (redux)
I'm rewriting the this story to get back in the mindset of writing! :3 ciyter servayed the lunch room, checking each of the tables to find his friends. his eyes rolled over the din of the crowd, then in the back he noticed ket sitting all alone.
Galactic Conflict - Chapter Twenty-Three
After rewriting it about six times, i am starting to realize that this will be a very long chapter, so i will be breaking it up and posting the final portion of the chapter in the epilogue.
Salaceon Tales
Although, i also know that no matter what, rewriting tales that have happened what seemed like forever ago means that things are easily changed and misconstrued.
vi. Back to Ayumi's (6~15~07)
Whichever name you choose will become your surname, and we will immediately use it to rewrite history for you. your wallet." he held out a paw. it was a moment before ayumi realized he wanted her to give him her wallet. she didn't hesitate.
Last of the Lycans 7
I had to rewrite this one twice because i didn't like how it ended up but it's finally here. here and edited by aacid thank you! for those who are just clicking i strongly recommend that you go back and read the other chapters before you read this one.
FutureLand
._ _error, rewriting memory subroutines._ _no... i'm joseph... i lived as a real life panther with fa..._ _park routines set, purging short term memory._ _my... my brothers... my parents..._ _family history deleted._ _i'm joseph...