Walk
Roughly, it makes two years i follow lectures; i'm not the studious-type, but i turn out well, i improve my fingering technique. i don't know why, but i'm always embarrassed when we're broaching about this subject.
Aurora Goes to Olympus
He decided to watch for opportunities to improve his life and his friends' lives going forward. he felt even more certain than usual that they would present themselves.
The World Games Convention - Chapter 2: A letter to Dewi
#2 of the world games convention greatly looking forward to feedback of how to improve telling a story through letters!
Horns & Halos CH7
"hmmm...improvement.", malice mused, giving her slave the opium. the drow then produced a small scroll and a bag, tossing them to nisha. "procure the items listed on the scroll.", she ordered, turning on her heel.
A shy bunny
If there are any grammar mistake or improvement in content or word choices feel free to comment. :) i slowly walked towards the only light source in this basement.
Rent
I got you a little something to improve your mood" the cat smiled, giggling softly before unzipping his backpack quickly. he took out the greasy, and still warm glamburger, fully extending his arm out to hand it to the rabbit. "oh yes!
Jurash "goju" Sulfam (French version)
English is not my native language, so i need to improve my skill in it. this french version is just here for francophone fur and/or for comparison with the english version.
A Tale of Lost Souls: Part One
I'm looking for some criticism so if you'd like to help me improve, and if you want more, message me. i may or may not keep writing it in second person, that'll depend on the response i get from this chapter.
Bereft can end
The end held it steady but got stopped, new friend former sun was gone, but new ascended the school changed to another, a new light new people descended from above, mended my heart, was nearly gone, gave new might a life will i was given to improve
Latias and latios CH.2 (Part 3)
Say how i can improve. **chapter 3: he is coming back home, back to us!** \ adam opened the door to his house. "mum! i'm home!" no reply. "dad?" still no reply. "jan!?"
THE FRONT: PART 8
They had been taken to the rear and there was nervous talk of amputations that did nothing to improve general morale. "yes private, i'll be there in just a second, just got to lace up my boot..."
A Human Outta Place
Light criticism is allowed to help me improve.** * * * chapter 1: not on earth in the city of new york there was a 16 year old boy walking through its busy streets his name was ykerum hatake.