Underneath the Wars
This will be incomplete, but i am hoping you will comment as i go along and help me fix my mistakes in grammar, spelling, vocabulary, logic, geography, physics, etc. anything you see that looks odd, let me know, please.
Land of Discord Prologue: A Bizarre Adventure
The group soon became exhausted and were surrounded by a horde of mutants, monsters, abominations, etc. even argeloth started to feel exhausted and was struggling to keep the spiritual magic that bind his body together.
PokeMEN World: Manual
Pokemon facilities and treatment:- since they are more humanoid now and more understanding of human technologies, laws, etc, many human-only facilities have now opened to pokemon as well, but there are also the pokemon exclusive ones that changed their services
Daggers of Darkness, Book #5: "The First Ones" - Prologue
However, i will try to keep the typos, etc., to a minimum. the main things i would like from those reading this are comments, questions, and suggestions. i only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite.
Michael and Amanda, Chapter 5
"what about rodents, lagomorphs, ursines, etc.?" "i don't dislike them; they just don't appeal to me." "would you accept one as a friend?" "most definitely.
First Steps: Here With Out You
M/m stuff applies etc... \*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* "could you tell me where i could find taro hofmeister?" i asked kindly to the female receptionist in the hospital ward entrance.
An Alternate Fursona (Character Sheet)
- food: pizza, chicken, fries, burgers, etc. - literature: the catcher in the rye, fahrenheit 451, the aeneid, the odyssey, and a tale of two cities. - drinks: soda, green tea, orange juice, and lemonade.
A perfect plan? Or Cupid's nightmare?
They spoke for a few minutes each, saying what an honour, how lucky it was, how good it was that everyone was here, etc. the sort of politician standard speech, except gerard, who spoke second, added a postscript.
Halloween in Devout America
Trick or treating and wearing costumes were generally allowed, on the condition said costumes mainly consisted of biblical figures, fictional characters from dsa-made shows, historical figures, etc.
Grad-Bash Part 13
She was excited to have a, and i quote, "gay best friend to go shopping with and do nails and comb fur and talk about guys and etc." (she went on for quite a while). i always told her she was just happy that i trusted her enough to tell a big secret to.
Falling for a lioness 2 Revege of the fallen part 39
As they ran down a further route running past caged cheetah, zebra,rhino etc. you name it, the poachers had caught and plan to skin them all. neither lioness or bitch didn't want to image a room filled with animals skin and bone.
Journey to another world pr3 ch100 pt1
Outside to those of the food vendors/merchants/etc..., nothing. after a while she finally gave up and returned to the staging area where all the other trainers were.