wander ~ Chapter 12
Creative writing afterwards went as it usually did, once more another "critique your classmates' assignments from over the weekend".
What is Love? Ch 2
Comments and critique wanted!!! tell me what i don't have but need, have too little of, and have too much of!
Subjugation, Ch 2
Enjoy all and as always, comments and critique are welcomed. **chapter 2** herik stepped out of the public transit module and pulled up the collar on his heavy jacket.
Lifestyle Of An Apple 3: Understandings
And i will also try not to take so long on this one lol, and leave comments please, i appreciate the critiques and yea i'll get right onto chapter 4!
Just another furry love story
Id love to hear feedback or critique since this is my first time writing this type of story. i hope you enjoy this and ill be glad to keep writing this story. again, enjoy :) just another furry love story.
Prologue: Minraya
* * * **so yeah i have decided start my path as a writer making some little stories about war, don't worry thought i am don't too edgy, please leave your comments with feedback and critique so i can make better writing in the future**. **thanks!
Prologue
Trust me when i say that critique and praise are my favorite comments.) in a system alike to ours but so different at the same, there was a war of chaos and unpredictability that two significant factions fought eachother to see who was the victor.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Insatisfaction Plagues Donichus
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** with donichus giving up the only life he'd come to know well for the past twenty years, the two found little reason to continue their nomadic journey to nowhere in particular.
Splintered Light, Chapter 2.2: Almost Planned Out
This post is now open to questions, considerations, critiques, quandaries, complaints, comments, and all those other wonderful things!
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.4c, The Great Illusion
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 8.4, the great illusion sandoval did not return to sleep after the group encountered the monkey on the road.
Hotel Emperador - Chapter 1: Tuesday Morning
As always, feedback and critique is more than welcome :> hotel emperador chapter 1 - tuesday morning by whitepython. they were painful news that he had to deliver in person.
Empty-- Birth of Thought
I'd really love some, guys - actual critique. thanks! this is the third in the series, by the way, not the first.