The legend of Tigersight Part II Power Overwhelming Chapter 9
#10 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
The Stray Cat, Ch. 12
He listened patiently and critiqued my use of the _ninjutsu_ techniques he taught me and showed me things i could have done better and other moves i could have used. it was intriguing hearing just how these moves worked in the context of my fight.
In Real Life
Feel free to comment or critique! warning: dark content-not a 'fun' story. steven sat at the desk in his room. it was so late, it was about to become early.
Any Given Day
Comments and critiques are always greatly appreciated, as they can help me become a better writer.
Protecter of the Forest
Feel free to critique any of my work! let me know what you liked, didn't like, and what could be changed or done better! protector of the forest a beaver tf "crap!"
Pink Champagne
As always, constructive critique and comments are always appreciated! i want to grow and get better as a writer! hope you all enjoy!
MSBA- Pool
I sit and watch, idly paying attention to the chatter but they seem more intent on just watching the match and critiquing it far more than they are trying to explain things, which i'm okay with for the time being.
The Dark Masquerade Part #01
Comments/critique welcome the noise was deafening. it shook the temple like it was made of cardboard, rattling windows, shaking doors and knocking one prized vase off its place on the display shelf above the central hearth.
Fuzzy Feelings Chapter 2 : Knowing From the Heart
Her ears were perked up, as if she was waiting for me to give her my critique.
Against All Odds: Epilogue
I'd really like to thank each and everyone of you for taking the time to read my first ever novel-length story, for the comments, the critique, the compliments and the support.
The legend of Tigersight Chapter 8
#9 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
Beer, Wine, and Spirits; Chapter 2 - Coping
Please critique, comment, and even red-line it if you feel like it. this is not the final draft. i'll not be doing any final drafts until i've gotten a few more chapters in. i've forgotten how much of a pain reformatting my stuff into sofurry is.