The Stone- Chapter 4
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The legend of Tigersight Part II Power Overwhelming Chapter 9
#10 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
The Stray Cat, Ch. 12
He listened patiently and critiqued my use of the _ninjutsu_ techniques he taught me and showed me things i could have done better and other moves i could have used. it was intriguing hearing just how these moves worked in the context of my fight.
In Real Life
Feel free to comment or critique! warning: dark content-not a 'fun' story. steven sat at the desk in his room. it was so late, it was about to become early.
Any Given Day
Comments and critiques are always greatly appreciated, as they can help me become a better writer.
Protecter of the Forest
Feel free to critique any of my work! let me know what you liked, didn't like, and what could be changed or done better! protector of the forest a beaver tf "crap!"
Pink Champagne
As always, constructive critique and comments are always appreciated! i want to grow and get better as a writer! hope you all enjoy!
MSBA- Pool
I sit and watch, idly paying attention to the chatter but they seem more intent on just watching the match and critiquing it far more than they are trying to explain things, which i'm okay with for the time being.
The Fattest Doll of All
Comments and critique appreciated, and enjoy! mystic was enjoying his stroll through the retail district, taking his time to enjoy the birdsong and observe all the varied furs sauntering about as they, too, enjoyed the wonderful weather.
Let The Wind Blow--Chapter 3
Mack talked about her morning class and how her critiques went ("its like...how existential can you get? its a rock for god's sakes!").
Watch Out Australia, Here Comes The Racers
The critiques and the directors falls behind and are currently in a race for last. "we have to move." amy says. "there's no way we're going to win when we're not in first." "i know." hector says. "i'm just wondering how we're going to win this time.
Fuzzy Feelings Chapter 2 : Knowing From the Heart
Her ears were perked up, as if she was waiting for me to give her my critique.