Embers of Dawn: Chapter 24: The Gate and the Gaze
Smells like cinnamon and repressed commentary. likely to explode near plush beds or romantic tension.”
The Fifth Day
As the two of them walked past, the cat peered over each object and provided commentary over the ones she deemed interesting. what reynard didn't expect were the type of objects she talked about.
A Failed Duty - Chapter 9
Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.
Examination
Most of the work of editing pd2: hmf has been rather simple, and in fact, quite fun. wwwolf has made it an enjoyable experience, with quite a bit of back and forth on various bits of my commentary.
Return to Vassalized Earth: Suburbia
“such a biting bit of social commentary! don't worry, we're saving all of your choice quotes for the archives, we've got a whole book full of them!
Torpedo Run Chapter 14
This time, without nivea to back him up with her supportive and half-sarcastic commentary, or clicks with her fearlessness and crazed banter.
86 MPH
* * * back on nltvs helicopter coverage, the camera tightly centered on the orange sports coupe, the anchor gave a running commentary on every scrap of up-to-date information they could muster.
Filling the Void - Chapter Twenty
His running commentary helped him focus. "too light...too woody..." he carefully examined the labels one-by-one, looking for a compliment to the one the negin had been drinking all night long.
Zootopia: Brave New World - Alex Hunter's Press Conference
These commentaries made her really nervous, and made her have a lot of flashbacks of the human world, and about all the things that followed the great reveal of evos to the world.
Shady Impressions: In Pursuit of a Professional #2
I was going to have some witty author commentary but argh i’m just confusing myself. whatever. russo robbed a robber and even though that’s still illegal as hell nobody cared because fuck robbers.
Living the Dream, Part 1
This one seems like way less of a fu-" wayne's commentary was interrupted by a whack in the side of the head. wayne kept joking without breaking stride. "or maybe not. i think i liked you better when you weren't whipped."
Episode 001: Comes the Thunder - part 1
Bernie and penny had tome to do occasional commentaries, but rick talked for most of the time, and he continued when they went down the bus, and until they separated for they classes. penny breathed as she was far from rick's talkative mouth.