Changing Fates, Chapter One
If i made mistakes, please respond with a snipit of said sentence so i know which one to change. right now my concern is that i used 'i' too many times. and yes, the guy is a human male, but you have yet to see the real story.
Chapter 4: A Change for the Better
"but your weight gain, your response to a simple rub, that pretty little earring...i don't know what's changed in you lately, but it seems to be a change for the better...and that's something i'd like to encourage.
Becoming: Part 6-Changes
Alex awoke with a shudder. He was in a cold sweat. He was out of breath, and hyperventilating. He needed to calm himself down. Closing his eyes, he let his mind go blank. He slowed his breath down to a regular rate and felt as his heart slowly stopped...
Chapter Two - A Change For The Better
I opened my eyes. It was dark out. A cool breeze blew past me, and I shivered, sitting up. I noticed that something was holding my legs down, and I gazed down at what appeared to be a tree root, deliberately dug up by something, and wrapped around my...
Fallen - Chapter 4 - Changes
It was a major lifestyle change for her. "what about julius? how are the two of you getting along?"
Changes of the eclipse: Chapter 10
#10 of changes of the eclipse: chapter 1 chapter 10 "garret, what the hell happened to you?!"
A slight change in plans (3)
So apperently the world governments were planing to create a space program and send all of the "new comers" into space to live peacefully in the newly designed biodomes that could aperently suport the entire world population, yet it would only be used...
Gemini – chapter 13: Changes
A loud crunching noise could be heard as he was changed quickly and painfully. clover felt weightless for a few seconds before he collided with the cold hard ground.
Change of Paces (Chapter One)
I'm just.... taking a change of pace and looking at the brighter side of things." "change of pace?" bubba said, shocked. "you?" "it was lucky's idea... you don't like it?" "no, no that's not it at all. it's just that.... it's you." "gee, thanks."
Change of heart Ch.2
CHAPTER 2 A couple minutes later I'm out the door waiting at the bus stop 2 blocks down the street. I light up a cigarette and take a long drag on it breathing in the nicotine, my ears perk up and I notice a couple more people start showing up near...
Change of Heart Ch.1
CHAPTER 1 I wake up at 6:15 A.M. to the sound of my alarm clock blaring away. My head instantly started pounding, like someone took a brick to it. I reach over and smack it off the night stand as it falls to the floor and stops buzzing; my headache...
Changes of the eclipse: Chapter 9
#9 of changes of the eclipse: chapter 1 ** i apologize for the wait but i got busted and i haven't been able to upload the next chapter but here it is chapter 9, if you haven't read the other 8 chapters go