Of Satyr and Gods Pt. 1
If i get good feedback, i may write up the second part. which will actually have something sexy in it._ crashing through the undergrowth, the girl fled. her sobs were loud and her breathing heavy as she blindly ran through the trees.
Terpsichorean
So as usual, feedback is lovely and so is spreading the word of this! spread the word about the word (of the day)! and enjoy~ terpsichorean- 1. pertaining to dancing 2.
Apocalypse book Chapter 1
Any feedback about it would be great. i know this is short, but aren't all stories boring in the first chapter? \*trumpet sound\* a giant lash of fire lashes out at a widowed mother.
The Unknown Soldier
All feedback is welcomed, but please make all criticism consturctive in nature. thank you. prologue: with empty brass lining the way, a lone soldier wanders the fields wounded physically and emotionally.
Foresight and Luck Part 11: Optimism
Please give me feedback. be warned of the homosexuality. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "i'm moving."
Amandariet episode 1
Hey guys. im new here. this is a story im working on. feel free to give feedback, just keep it courteous. also feel free to write or draw whatever you want about this story! more episodes to come!
War High: A Fox's Tale; Chapter 1 Part 3
[in the story of course] i appreciate the feedback, as always. yours truly, the author, roxas\_sempai
Acies Aeternam (eternal battlefield) chapter one
Ofcourse i would like to have some feedback, and if there are any typo's please let me know. cheers!
The Harbinger Ch. 1: And so it begins...
I'm not entirely sure where this is going, so if you want to try to influence the story, leave a comment or message me, as well as giving any feedback on the story. im definitely a beginner author, so please, anything would help. thanks for reading!
The night of dragons
Any kind of feedback is really appreciated <3 it's been a long, hot day. the sun had already set behind the western cliffs from hours but the warm air that still blew across all the valley kept the temperature high.
The Beginning (Preview)
Let me know how you guys like it, with feedback really helping me out. took a break from writing for a while and needed to know if my skill has dwindled, or needs some polishing. hope you guys enjoy it! "has it been six months already?"
That Day
I accept you're feedback. april 7, 2008- 5:00 am "riiiiiing riiiiiing!" the alarm clock sprang into life, singing the song of its people. tyler, 17, woke up to this noise, like he did every morning.