The Unknown Soldier
All feedback is welcomed, but please make all criticism consturctive in nature. thank you. prologue: with empty brass lining the way, a lone soldier wanders the fields wounded physically and emotionally.
Foresight and Luck Part 11: Optimism
Please give me feedback. be warned of the homosexuality. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "i'm moving."
Amandariet episode 1
Hey guys. im new here. this is a story im working on. feel free to give feedback, just keep it courteous. also feel free to write or draw whatever you want about this story! more episodes to come!
War High: A Fox's Tale; Chapter 1 Part 3
[in the story of course] i appreciate the feedback, as always. yours truly, the author, roxas\_sempai
The Harbinger Ch. 1: And so it begins...
I'm not entirely sure where this is going, so if you want to try to influence the story, leave a comment or message me, as well as giving any feedback on the story. im definitely a beginner author, so please, anything would help. thanks for reading!
Acies Aeternam (eternal battlefield) chapter one
Ofcourse i would like to have some feedback, and if there are any typo's please let me know. cheers!
Rex Chapter 1
**_this is my first story on here and i know it is kinda short but i have another chapter mostly finished so hopefully i can get that out soon if you have any feedback please tell me in the comments.
Terror in a World of Murky Puddles
A recent idea that compelled me to write a short blurb, please do give me your feedback! i will definitely be adding to this as time goes on. "fucking piss..."
Juryokine: Epilogue
Give me some feedback in the comments! and, as always, if you feel like doing me a favor, you can buy the book on amazon in print or on kindle. what's coming up next, you ask?
That Day
I accept you're feedback. april 7, 2008- 5:00 am "riiiiiing riiiiiing!" the alarm clock sprang into life, singing the song of its people. tyler, 17, woke up to this noise, like he did every morning.
Black Velvet (Prologue of an unfinished story)
Please provide feedback. all criticizes, whether constructive or not, will help. prologue she regained her consciousness, but not her memory of where she was or why she was here. the world came to her focus, the fox finally saw the blood on her hand.
Rebirth, prologue
#1 of the cycle of the phoenix: rebirth this story is here partly as a teaser and partly because i need some feedback to get motivated.