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In a novel where you're writing in what is now a popular viewpoint - close third person - you are trying to write from your character's shoulder. "john walked down the street, hating every step.

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Write something in first person, write something in third person, write something in a tangled mix, write something in a perspective nobody's heard of before. experiment. never, ever, look down on a genre as completely worthless.

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Tage im Juni - MÜSLIMÄDCHEN - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Müslimädchen Schon wieder zu spät. Sie konnte schwören, dass das Universum sich gelegentlich eine Auszeit vom Sterneschubsen und Kometenkegeln nahm, um Zeit und Raum einzig und allein um sie kreisen zu lassen. Sie...

Angst, Antelope, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bed, Bedroom, Cervine, City, Comedy, Contemporary, Desperation, Dread, Dress, Equine, Evil, Eyes, Fear, Female, Fighting, Flight, German Language, Grinning, Hooves, House, Humor, Insanity, Male, Mammal, Mask, Modern, Multiple Species, Mystery, No-Yiff, Novel, Other, Parody, Plot Development, Real Life, Series, Short, Short Story, Shorts, Smile, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Stripes, Summer, Suspense, Third Person, Thriller, Various Species, Violence (Not In Yiff), Weapon, Zebra

Tage im Juni - ENTDECKER (1) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Entdecker ## - 1 - Das Treiben im Luchshaus war diesen Morgen ungewohnt hektisch. Man hätte fast sagen können fanatisch. Kaja war damit beschäftigt, die große Schrankwand im Wohnzimmer bis auf das letzte Buch...

Adolescent, Angst, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bed, Bedroom, Bizarre, Black, Bobcat, Boy, Canid, Canine, Character Development, Contemporary, Dread, Dream, Ears, Emotion, Family, Fantasy, Father, Fear, Feline, Female, Fox, German Language, House, Lynx, Male, Mammal, Modern, Mother, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Novel, Outdoors, Plot Development, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Series, Short, Short Story, Son, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Suspense, Tail, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person

Writing Tips

If it's third person, how much knowledge do they have? are they omniscient? or are they still stuck in one character's viewpoint? you can also spice up your story by having multiple viewpoints from different characters.

Advice, Help, No-Yiff, Stories, Writers block, writing, writing skills

HALUNKEN (4) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Halunken ## - 4 - ##### ARIK MAAS Nach einer Minute öffnete sie sich erneut und Bossels Kopf tauchte wieder auf. Genauso mürrisch und misstrauisch blickend wie zuvor. Er war sichtlich unerfreut, dass der Waschbär...

Adolescent, Alcohol, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bad Language, Blackmail, Bovine, Boy, Canid, Canine, Character Development, Cigarette, City, Claws, Contemporary, Dishonesty, Dog, Drugs, Drunk, German Language, Goat, Gray, Grey, Grinning, House, Laugh, Male, Mammal, Multiple, Multiple Species, Night, No-Yiff, Novel, Outdoors, Paw, Paws, Plot Development, Poodle, Public, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Red, Series, Short, Smoking, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Summer, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, Young

ABENTEURER (2) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Abenteurer ## - 2 - ##### NIKLAS SCHUPP Niklas konnte das kleine Luchsherz schlagen hören. Schnell und nervös. Ein dumpfes Trommeln, wie das der Maus. Angst, Unsicherheit. Aber in Janniks Gesicht war...

Adolescent, Adventure, Angst, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bad Language, Black, Bobcat, Boy, Cat, Character Development, City, Claws, Contemporary, Ears, Emotion, Eyes, Fear, Feline, Friendship, German Language, Gray, Grey, Hindpaw, Hospital, House, Lynx, Male, Mammal, Modern, Multiple, Multiple Species, Mystery, No-Yiff, Novel, Paw, Paws, Plot Development, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Short Story, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Suspense, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, Young

Tage im Juni - LEHRMEISTER (3) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Lehrmeister ## - 3 - Im dritten Stock herrschte immer Nacht. Die Fenster zur Straßenseite wehrten sich gegen neugierige Blicke mit dicken Vorhängen, zweckentfremdeten Schranktüren und den Resten von Umzugskartons. Die...

Adolescent, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bed, Bedroom, Blood, Boy, Canid, Canine, Character Development, Claws, Contemporary, Dark, Death, Depressing, Depression, Dog, Emotion, German Language, Gray, Grey, Group, Harsh, House, Macabre, Male, Mammal, Mature, Morbid, Multiple, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Novel, Plot Development, Poodle, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Red, Rough, Series, Short, Short Story, Smoking, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, Various Species, Violence, Young

Tage im Juni - FREUNDE (2) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Freunde ## - 2 - Jannik schnaufte missmutig. Er schnaufte, als er sich den Rucksack über die Schultern warf, als er den Schulparkplatz entlang trottete und als er sein Profil auf animali kontrollierte. Fünf neue...

Adolescent, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Authority, Bobcat, Boy, Brown, Bunny, Character Development, Cheetah, City, Classroom, Claws, College, Contemporary, Cougar, Ears, Emotion, Emotional, Feline, Female, Friendship, German Language, Girl, Grey, Highschool, Lagomorph, Leopard, Lion, Lynx, Male, Mammal, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Novel, Outdoors, Paw, Plot Development, Public, Rabbit, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Relationships, School, Short, Short Story, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Teacher, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, University, White, Young

Tage im Juni - FREUNDE (3) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Freunde ## - 3 - Als Frau Gruber die Stunde beendete, fühlte es sich für Jannik wie eine Selbstverständlichkeit an, sich an Chucks Krankenbesuch zu beteiligen. Er fühlte eine Verbindung zum kleinen Tiger, der ebenso...

Adolescent, Angst, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bobcat, Boy, Bunny, Character Development, City, Classroom, College, Contemporary, Deer, Emotion, Emotional, Eyes, Female, Fight, Fighting, Friendship, German Language, Gray, Grey, Hare, Highschool, Lagomorph, Lynx, Male, Mammal, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Paw, Paws, Plot Development, Public, Rabbit, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Realistic, Relationships, School, Series, Short, Short Story, Shy, Stag, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, Tiger, University, Various Species, Young

The Origin of Nevyn and Arzosah

In the later chapters i will only (try to) use third person in the present and first in the past. ps. will call the story ona (origin of nevyn and arzosah) in journals and posts. pss. have made the text smaler (12 now).

Arzosah, Clean, Intro, Nevyn, No-Yiff, Story Progress

Tage im Juni - ENTDECKER (2) - Ger

**TAGE IM JUNI** # Entdecker ## - 2 - Jannik wanderte verträumt den schmalen Weg entlang und erspähte im Vorgarten einen rotbefellten Schweif zwischen gelben Gräsern. Er hielt darauf zu und der fuchsige Rest tauchte auf, samt Kopf mit...

Adolescent, Adventure, Angst, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bobcat, Boy, Brown, Canid, Canine, Character Development, City, Contemporary, Ears, Fashion, Fear, Feline, Forest, Fox, Friendship, Garden, German Language, Gray, Grey, Hospital, Humor, Laugh, Lynx, Male, Mammal, Modern, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Novel, Orange, Outdoors, Plot Development, Public, Raccoon, Raccoon/Fox, Real Life, Realistic, Relationships, Series, Short Story, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Student, Summer, Tail, Tattoo, Teen, Teenager, Teenagers, Third Person, Tree, Underwear, Various Species, Young