The Tale of Silvermoon
Hey everyone this is my first chapter to my first story, not sure how well it turned out so i'll let you guys do the talking. if it gets good results from you guys, i will try and continue the story, i have a quite a few ideas for this story.
A New Lifestyle
This is my first story that i have made, there is more done, and my friend has edited a bit already, i would love any feedback on how to make my writing better, although a bit shorter than what i would have liked, so the next parts will most likely be longer
balto's return
This is my first story on my new account give me ur thoughts in the comments on what u think will happen next or how balto will react next about how is old wife jenna has a new mate sorry for the bad spelling i will write a new story called rosexsteele tomorrow
"Revenge" part 1-introduction
(this is my first story, so bear with me..)
Chapter 1- Pilot
This is my first story so far, and i hope you all enjoy it! please, feel free to comment after reading to make any suggestions for my next piece or to tell me how i can make it better for you.
L'arc The Bloaty Lion: Shower
my first story about l'arc, not long or all that great. i need to write more so i can get back into my writing state of mind. well enjoy anyway :p l'arc the lion was standing in front of the mirror looking at his physique.
the drake and the dog
. ------------------ please give me helpful feedback as this was my first story . unfortunately the content box wasn't working today. my first ever story on so furry. please feel free to request a story and comment
What is Love? Ch 1
Okay, this is my first story here, sooo it's not going to be perfect!! :) i accept any comments, and help me do better by suggesting things please!!!
Bonds of Love (1)
#1 of bonds of love series this is my first story i ever wrote hope you all like please comment and rate bonds of love: the series chapter one the story begins again i laid there in bed with him.
Shade & Luna Chapter 1: Welcome to the (Concrete) Jungle
_this is my first story, please critique it in the comments and don't forget to rate, subscrive, favorite, or anything up to and including worship. thank you._
Chapter 1 : I Bite
### **_(ok this is my first story and i will try to make it good and long)_** **_well this story is about mint, a female wolf. she is a black with some silver fur mixed in with the black. her eyes are a dark grey.
Sonic adventures: Chapter 1 Warning: very sexual
Okay, well my first story starts with this: i woke up one morning with a knock on the door. so i went to the and opened it, and saw sonic standing there.