Poem #60: You
Every part of who you are is what defines you and you should value every piece sometimes you gotta take a step back and take in the whole picture all at once to realize what you are really seeing and it isn't easy to think it's hard to criticize
Dragons Never Burn (Prologue Idea)
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated! i'm a dragon. i'm an old dragon, with many things to teach. a dragon without power, or without the power other dragons are born with. i'm a blank slate, i'm neutral, and the future is mine to protect.
Loonatics Uncut: Series Notes
And so, here's hoping you enjoy the work - comments are eagerly welcomed, both praise and constructive criticism. i've already got the first 'season' of the 'show' planned out, but some edits are undoubtedly going to happen.
love your little puppy pt 5
Kidda sick so im tired but i uploaded this for you guys by the way shoutout to maxdiapers for watching me fankyoo love your little puppy pt 5 marshalls p.o.v while hiding under the blanket nursing on my pacifier i hear chase oh fuck i think hes gonna criticize
Teasing the Guard - Story Excerpt
This is the first story i have ever posted here, so you can be critical, just don't tear me to pieces please?
12. My New Life-9-3
Uncle kel'star had assisted with the critical cases, being a doctor himself, with his skills being strongly augmented by his force and magical abilities for faster yet more thorough healing.
Forgotten Ch. 2
Coments and criticism please and thank youz =] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- my mind was dazed and i couldn't help but keep my thoughts focused on him. my only desire then was to be with him
The Ideal Furry
-doesn't resent the human race -doesn't depict "anthros" as the pinnacle of purity and overall good-guyness - accepts all forms of criticism no matter how harsh - honestly tries to improve their work - tries to finish their
Misplaced Muse
Constructive criticism would be very much welcome :3 edit: why does it look like a paragraph when i put it in nice looking stanzas .____. attempts to fix edit2: yay it's fixed now!
The Council of Species
I am a new writer, obviously, and i need criticism. the council of species is a meeting of many gods in the world of vessel. the gods that come to this meeting each represent a species of mortals living in vessel.
Countdown to a New Chapter
, their beliefs others who supported their friends and provided relief we all have our books, the novels ever being written of our lives and even of the lovers to which we were smitten though some chose to live alone, it did not diminish the critical
Her Peculiar Appendage
Then turned her head to address her critic. but not enough to take her eyes off the intruders. "not now, dammit! we have company!" the arrow-scaled extremity was quite adamant. _"hiiissssss!"_ jocasta crossed her hands.