Power and Pride

Hope you enjoy, and if you have any comments, criticisms, or requests go ahead and post away or drop me a line. **chapter i: starry starry red** 1.

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I, Dacien - Chapter One - Captivity

"i am not criticizing, just ... yes." the minotaur paused. "perhaps you are right; he does see things we miss, and so ... but i want to know what he sees about this human." lord fog has claimed me, thought nestor.

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Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Royal Entrance is Made

And carefully sifting through them, he found himself to be ashamed of two things: that he was only now critically examining his physique, and that he was so critically examining his physique.

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Tow

I mean people who shame and terrify anyone who criticizes them into silence.

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Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Into the Light

Instead of days, the prognosis now indicates a critical failure in 10 hours, give or take a few minutes.

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Prologue

As always, comments and constructive criticism is always welcome ^,=,^ fraolith winced as the alarm blared beside him, rolling over and slamming the snooze.

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The Mourning After - Chapter 24 (More Q's than A's)

I am at a critical point in my training where i need to learn to totally suppress and control the spirit or..." his statement didn't need to be finished. we all knew what would happen. this was the reason he couldn't stay here in zangar.

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1. An Ordinary Life

"please let this be a good one," kendra thinks, craving the respite only a well-spun story can provide for her overly stressed and critical mind.

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"The Gift": Richard's Storyline, Ch 8, Part 1

Turning back around to look at me, his critical eye struck me with his expectation. "ricardo... how do we begin?" i--

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Furry Fan Interviews Character Guide

When he isn't quiet, he tends to criticize aniro, much to his chagrin.

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