Incomplete Life Portrait
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand what i can approve on. the come to dust and burn down the tower characters in incomplete life portrait are copyrighted to tiberius rings.
Chakai OC info
Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.
Fuzzy Form
And finally, comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. thanks for reading! **-- fuzzy form --** unblinking eyes greet upon entry, the smirk - perpetual.
Reintroduced to Vulnerability
Haunting memories drive me forward but the amber eyes of rejection do not break the gaze is ever foreboding, always present the nightmarish daydreams concocted small moments that propel volatile imaginations visions that drive emotions into a spiral critical
love your little puppy pt 5
Kidda sick so im tired but i uploaded this for you guys by the way shoutout to maxdiapers for watching me fankyoo love your little puppy pt 5 marshalls p.o.v while hiding under the blanket nursing on my pacifier i hear chase oh fuck i think hes gonna criticize
Coming Out
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand where i can approve on. [intro] today's a very cold morning but i'm going to go outside (x4) good day [verse #1] will i lose myself? as i start exploring the outside?
Misplaced Muse
Constructive criticism would be very much welcome :3 edit: why does it look like a paragraph when i put it in nice looking stanzas .____. attempts to fix edit2: yay it's fixed now!
The Ideal Furry
-doesn't resent the human race -doesn't depict "anthros" as the pinnacle of purity and overall good-guyness - accepts all forms of criticism no matter how harsh - honestly tries to improve their work - tries to finish their
Countdown to a New Chapter
, their beliefs others who supported their friends and provided relief we all have our books, the novels ever being written of our lives and even of the lovers to which we were smitten though some chose to live alone, it did not diminish the critical
Forgotten Ch. 2
Coments and criticism please and thank youz =] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- my mind was dazed and i couldn't help but keep my thoughts focused on him. my only desire then was to be with him
The Council of Species
I am a new writer, obviously, and i need criticism. the council of species is a meeting of many gods in the world of vessel. the gods that come to this meeting each represent a species of mortals living in vessel.
12. My New Life-9-3
Uncle kel'star had assisted with the critical cases, being a doctor himself, with his skills being strongly augmented by his force and magical abilities for faster yet more thorough healing.