THE ARENA
The first chapter to a story i wrote ages ago. feel free to criticize it as harshly as you want!...although, maybe not too harsh, i am kind of sensitive. ;w; ? -1- halcyon -1- the arena. a brutal colosseum reminiscent of old rome.
Irish Lads (Chapter 1)
#1 of irish lads first chapter hope you all enjoy. please leave comments.
Moon-Shadowed Past Chapter 1
first chapter in the story of furian wolf alright everyone, this is the opening chapter of my first story so any comment will be helpful.
Eyes of stone : Chapter 1
Anyway, here's the first chapter, i hope you enjoy. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ troy awoke to the buzzing of his alarm.
The Ethereal Plane: Chapter 1
There we go, first chapter done. no furry yet, but it will be in chapter two or three. feel free to rate, comment, favorite or watch, thanks for reading.
The Adventures of Nall Wolf: Ch.1: The Norm
#1 of adventures of nall wolf this is the first chapter in the story of nall wolf.
Chapter 3-Fang vs. Krystal
(to see the continuation of this fight ready the first chapter of "the three dragons")
Michael Flehmen - Character Detail
#7 of malakye's story - character profiles & back stories righty-oh-then, in the build up to the launch of the first chapter of the sequel to the story 'a place to belong' i have decided to post a brief back story form some of the more important characters
Digimon: Data Release
#1 of digimon: data release tweaked and a nice place to end the extended first page as the first chapter. i'm happy with this as a "manga style of writting, short chapters of intense writting and i hope to continue again shortly. any and all comments are
Aciec Aeternam (etarnal Battlefield) Into and info
And the first chapters might not be as good as the rest so please bear with me :p. i hope you all enoy, and i would love to have feedback on the chapters!
Dewey Zero-One 05: Triple Threat
In fact, years ago, i started a rewrite after recognizing that i was making a mess of things, but ran out of time during the first chapter. i still have the rewrite.
Shooting Star - Gemini
So what do you think of the first chapter? it was about a month ago that i decided to add the element of astrology into my story (which made it much more interesting than my original concept).