Jen of Asara Part 1: Of Kings and Contests

I hope you all enjoy it, and comments and critiques are much appreciated.

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Max and Rita: Lilith's Wrath Chapter 2

Ninja skills that allowed me to sneak by you but then i heard you talking to your pokémon so i thought maybe this guy is some kind of nut but before you judge me i then found out that you actually seemed to be having a conversation so i erased that harsh critique

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The fruits of her labor

Special thanks to my helper, critique guy, formatter, proofer, etc: kanohaninja amongst the roots of a great tree a lone grey wolf lay with her back to the trunk.

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Bomb Shelter

critique is welcome, but be gentle. **chapter two - bomb shelter** ** ** the project was about as exciting as could be expected for a class outside of her major.

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Only a Painting

I jumped suddenly when i heard a certain critique: "i dunno, i prefer a tails hedgehog combination." "t-tails . . . " i said, nervous. "i'm sorry," he said, "i hope i didn't interrupt a surprise." "no . . . not at all."

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Life and Love

All critique is welcome, as this is an evolving story, and if it would be a better story for someone elses imput, then i'm all ears.

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Annun - Pathfinder Custom Race

I absolutely welcome any critiquing. if you want to use it in any campaigns you're doing, please let me know how it goes, and include class and feats and such too. **annun** the annuns are a race of humanoid canines whose origins are lost to time.

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Dog Cracking

So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :

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Dog Cracking

So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :

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The Lead Crown: Ch 9.4b, Shock and Awe

Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!

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Depressive Thoughts (working through writers block)

critique is always appreciated, so enjoy, and tell me what you think! :3 i had absolutely no idea where i was. i had been wandering around for what seemed like hours in a bleak, shapeless, wasteland.

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Path of the Lion (Prologue)

The lion as i mentioned in the last upload, i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique

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