Jen of Asara Part 1: Of Kings and Contests
I hope you all enjoy it, and comments and critiques are much appreciated.
Max and Rita: Lilith's Wrath Chapter 2
Ninja skills that allowed me to sneak by you but then i heard you talking to your pokémon so i thought maybe this guy is some kind of nut but before you judge me i then found out that you actually seemed to be having a conversation so i erased that harsh critique
The fruits of her labor
Special thanks to my helper, critique guy, formatter, proofer, etc: kanohaninja amongst the roots of a great tree a lone grey wolf lay with her back to the trunk.
Bomb Shelter
critique is welcome, but be gentle. **chapter two - bomb shelter** ** ** the project was about as exciting as could be expected for a class outside of her major.
Only a Painting
I jumped suddenly when i heard a certain critique: "i dunno, i prefer a tails hedgehog combination." "t-tails . . . " i said, nervous. "i'm sorry," he said, "i hope i didn't interrupt a surprise." "no . . . not at all."
Life and Love
All critique is welcome, as this is an evolving story, and if it would be a better story for someone elses imput, then i'm all ears.
Annun - Pathfinder Custom Race
I absolutely welcome any critiquing. if you want to use it in any campaigns you're doing, please let me know how it goes, and include class and feats and such too. **annun** the annuns are a race of humanoid canines whose origins are lost to time.
Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :
Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.4b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
Depressive Thoughts (working through writers block)
critique is always appreciated, so enjoy, and tell me what you think! :3 i had absolutely no idea where i was. i had been wandering around for what seemed like hours in a bleak, shapeless, wasteland.
Path of the Lion (Prologue)
The lion as i mentioned in the last upload, i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique