Important Issues of Writing
Let's go up the ladder in terms of "depths of seriousness".
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 23 - A trip down Memory Lane - The Love I lost
"so seriously, i wish you two the best of luck. it was nice hanging out with you. i'm going-" "wait." angel didn't move and also stopped kyurex in his tracks. she still kept the serious tone. "what?"
D.E1/LOTVS Crossover: Chapter 5 (Husky P.O.V)
Yukiomaru seemed very serious, not making eye contact and almost appearing emotionless. his seriousness almost reminded hasky of captain silver. it was incredible that the little creature could exude such an air of authority. "yes, yukiomaru."
A Rabbit in Trouble
Bewildered by what she was told, the younger rabbit looked at the other with a gasp "y-you can't be serious?" she asked nervously. "i'm dead serious, yuli!
The Garden
Because of how old it is you're free to post honest opinions about the quality or style, but not any serious critique because i've made steps in different, more serious writing. xd i have no idea what tags to use for this.
Moonlit Confession (By Moonlight: Twilight Tales)
Sam gets serious:) "here." under the moonlight streaming through the kitchen window, sam locked eyes with yu's ruby ones, feeling his own face burn as he thrusted the handpicked bouquet at the rabbit.
Love From A Stranger Part 5
Julia was born and raised by jessica's mother, her parents died of a serious illness just like jessica's dad. she even visited jessica's mother whenever, even though she's both jessica's and julia's mother.
Promises to a Friend Chapter 1
Danny had never joked about anything this serious before, yet it seemed too good to be true. danny: silver? you there? silver: are you serious?
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 11 - Bad Luck
Blaze steadily watched his opponent who didn't seem to take the spoken sentence seriously. the umbreon knew blaze would say something like that.... "speaking nonsense is a sign of weakness...exactly what i would expect from you..."
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
Don't you realize how hard he just let you and flak down...seriously...you should think about it, i'm only trying to-" "well, well, well.....if it isn't bull..." bulltreio turned around.
Prologue & Chapter 1
His mother looked at him serious: "leo, you haven't even started them, have you?" leo let a sigh and left his head down and admitted it lamely: "not a single one."
Kobold on the Train
>"so you're serious?" "dead serious." >"i... look, i'm flattered, but, i mean, you're a human, and i'm---" "so?" >"well, that's just---it's just---" "it's just what?" >"it's weird!" "a train blowj0b is always weird, i think."