Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
All Good Things, Chapter 1
The beaver lifts a brow, resting an elbow on the counter and gazing up at caleb with a critical eye. "you're practically bubbly." "oh, he always is, didn't you know?"
Furry Little Secret (ch.1)
Oh and please it's constructive criticism, no flamers, no bashers - yes, there is a difference. constructive criticism: arigato! flamers/bashers: sayona**
Past to Present
"father hired you to help me and teach me... but i don't need a critic... i need a friend."
Mewtwo and Lucario
And please criticize me if you dislike the story! i need to become a better writer and criticizing is one of the only ways for me to get better. oh, and there may be a second part. still debating it with myself.** _
A Death Knight's Tale
I am open to criticism, and how to make this story better. thank you! pain. misery. death. anger. hatred. this is what she woke up to... the first thing she saw? darkness. she could feel hard stone underneath her. cold. seeping into her bones.
My Dreams are in Stories
Comments and constructive criticism are, as always, very much welcome. :) -- my dreams are in stories -- my dreams become stories, all from my mind, of dragons and wizards, each sword is drawn. fantasy epics like no other kind. "humble beginnings?
The evening
critics are appreciated. it was 6 in the evening. hindenburg's eco-system began their daily turn-over. the orange sky was fading fast, drew nearer and nearer to the half-rounded ruby red sun as time ticked by.
A Tale of Two Tails (Intro)
#1 of a tale of two tails i've written things before but this is my first furry story so please any criticisms would really be appreciated :3 (intro) _"i'm gay."_ i thought to myself with a sudden realisation.
Moving On
Drop a comment or toss me a message; i deeply appreciate comments and criticism, and make attempts to improve my writing based on them. i would also like to thank mr.
The Wanderer
I appreciate every comment and piece of criticism that comes my way, and try to use it to improve subsequent writing. i would also like to thank several friends, mr.
My lyrics for "Candy Candy" from Tengai Makyou
Burning down those who criticize is okay! letting go of your bad days is okay! the rules of the school are the slave's rules; / your freedom has ceased! so reclaim your trampled pride and live by the rules / of the beast!