Wolf's Heart Prologue
(this is my first story any positive feedback would be appreciated. this is a flashback.) a young male wolf sits there alone in the corner of the doorway reading during recess.
Caged Balloons - Prologue
Either way i love feedback hope yall enjoy it. p.o.v damien [???] sir, please stop! some nurse was chasing a patient through the halls of the hospital. for the short time ive been here, ive seen some weird scenery.
Forging of Shadows
Depending on feedback, i'll finish it and perhaps make it a series. feel free to criticize. i can take it :) my grammar isn't all that great. a smell of fire and smoke filled the late night air.
Mew's love Pt.2
Sorry for the mistake's im still pretty new at this but still feedback is welcome mew's love pt.3 will be out soon
Sweet Revenge
So feedback please!! and if you spot any misspelling please point it out. i can't believe it six years....six whole years wow i really need to check up on mary and the gang.
Love <3 (Work in progress. Want to know what you think.)
It may not be the best but please leave feedback and help me improve (this is in progress) i had never been one for company; i preferred it alone in my room. drawing, reading or staring at my paws.
Doom: Rise of Evil Ch.1: Arrival.
I hope you enjoy this doom 3 inspired story, please fav if you like, post feedback in the comments, and please, don't pull a total bitch move and flag it. doom: rise of evil. "when i woke up, everyone was dead."
Might Be Retiring From TOTGM For A While
I suppose the general lack of feedback and/or community reactions toward the series.
Night's Embrace
But i finally did it so expect more hopefully give me some feedback and your opinions i guess, those are supposedly good. i cannot for the life of me, figure out this site's formatting. please do excuse the lack thereof. have a swell night.
Amber Scenery
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. an amber hill on sunny day, a cooling wind to guide the way. fresh air blows through the scenery, sends shivers through the greenery.
A Child's Fears
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. mother, there's a monster hiding underneath my bed: the tentacles snake up to try and grab my head.
When The Levys Break
I would appreciate as much feedback as possible. enjoy. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ several thousand years ago...