Aversion (Prologue)
Looking for feedback, questions, concerns, comments. anything really, seeing if this gets anywhere. i'll post more if there's an interest, or feel free to reach out to me. i sat at a booth with my girlfriend, watching people parade on the dance floor.
Mew's love Pt.2
Sorry for the mistake's im still pretty new at this but still feedback is welcome mew's love pt.3 will be out soon
Sweet Revenge
So feedback please!! and if you spot any misspelling please point it out. i can't believe it six years....six whole years wow i really need to check up on mary and the gang.
Love <3 (Work in progress. Want to know what you think.)
It may not be the best but please leave feedback and help me improve (this is in progress) i had never been one for company; i preferred it alone in my room. drawing, reading or staring at my paws.
Doom: Rise of Evil Ch.1: Arrival.
I hope you enjoy this doom 3 inspired story, please fav if you like, post feedback in the comments, and please, don't pull a total bitch move and flag it. doom: rise of evil. "when i woke up, everyone was dead."
Caged Balloons - Prologue
Either way i love feedback hope yall enjoy it. p.o.v damien [???] sir, please stop! some nurse was chasing a patient through the halls of the hospital. for the short time ive been here, ive seen some weird scenery.
Forging of Shadows
Depending on feedback, i'll finish it and perhaps make it a series. feel free to criticize. i can take it :) my grammar isn't all that great. a smell of fire and smoke filled the late night air.
Amber Scenery
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. an amber hill on sunny day, a cooling wind to guide the way. fresh air blows through the scenery, sends shivers through the greenery.
A Child's Fears
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. mother, there's a monster hiding underneath my bed: the tentacles snake up to try and grab my head.
When The Levys Break
I would appreciate as much feedback as possible. enjoy. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ several thousand years ago...
Their Echoes
This is a first and feel free to critique, give feedback and tell me what you think! thank you for checking out this story, i hope you enjoy it. the snow leopard's ears flicked along to the beat to the old clock.
Demeaned
This piece is about a message and i would always like some feedback. a fox stands in front of a mirror and considers his own image. he looks at his black tipped ears and touches one of them, parting the hairs that meet there.