Liminality
A year starts not on January first. The days may hunder but the seasons speak of time's long march, of fast time, slow time. Thirst for "start" and "end" neglects the limen sleek. So, why do some unsubtle sciences forget...
Jackie-The-Junior Epilogue-Justice
I hereby sentence you too... seven years in medium security prison with time served, on the count of level one grand larceny. this will be served first, and you have no possibility of parole on this part of your sentence."
There Once
There once was a man that lived under a rock. In fact, he actually was the rock, and he wasn't even a man. He just sat on the side of the road until someone picked him up and threw him into a lake and he drowned. Poor rock.
A New Family Part 5
A New Family Part 5 Dramatis Personae Family of 5 (Colonists) - Ataksak (Mother) 41 - Negafook (Father) 42 - Nanook (elder son) 22 - Pinga (daughter) 22 - Silla (younger daughter) 8 Other Cast - Alessandra (Alpha den Healer, Colonist) 215 -...
The Death Sentence
A thirty year old feline woke up in the dead of night to a cracking sound, as if someone had broken into his apartment. He reached under his pillow and grabbed his knife before throwing off the blankets. His body was muscular, and his fur a light...
Writing Tips
If you are writing descriptive or narrative text, watch how long the sentences go. in some cases, such as action, short sentences can work very well. in other cases, a longer sentence is better, but still needs the appropriate pauses.
Writing Tips vol. 2
Sample sentence: "are you sure that you're okay with me taking your bike?" there - adverb or pronoun, depending on usage.
Lost Little Kitty Chapter 8
If you show remorse and be honest, you may only get a short sentence. at this point, i'll be honest, the most they can get you for without question is possession and smuggling.
Writing Tips vol. 4
It may sound like a contradiction, but that's what lends a power sentence it's punch. an example from one of my recent works: "hector, my sweet hector...
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
For example, in that previous sentence i could have written "to modify words in ways that aren't really necessary." strictly speaking, 'really' doesn't need to be there. it doesn't change the meaning of the sentence, it simply adds emphasis to it.
ricky and michael chapter 1
"its about an inmate ricky andes he... he did some bad things but i dont feel he deserved the sentence he got."
Don't know me ch 6
"......fine, the sentence means if you had sex with juuiichii." "oh.....what's sex?..." i asked "oh god...umm...sex is, well it's ummm....james." master said as he put other master on his lap.
Teddy is a happy bear
He hadn't noticed the first two times, but now he could clearly see that he was repeating the sentence with exactly the same tone and rhythm.