I've Lost Count of the Homes That I Have Lost

On the plus side, i think this "sonnet, blank verse, envoi" form has promise, it needs a name though. i've lost count of the homes that i have lost. one time too many i've been driven out.

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Accompanied by Tornado Siren

I do like the sonnet/blank verse/ rhymed envoi pattern it produced. i think it deescalates and escalates similar to the way that musical theatre might use breaking into song, lapsing back into dialog, then having a big finishing number.

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Ballade of Three Birds

But short version, it's a form where you have three rhymed eight line verses that all end with the same line (or half of a line, in this case,) and then a four line "envoi" usually addressed to someone called "prince" that also ends with that same line and

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Baseball in Winter 3

"this is where envoi, beloved father and husband, died. in october of 2005, his experimental plane malfunctioned and went down. this is to commemorate his life."

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