Poem #84: Once Said
Well, this is my first dialogue poem. it's kind of more of a rough draft, and i may change things later, depending on my mood. just got in the mood to write something, and this is what came from it. please comment and tell me what you think!
Rogue Wind - The Arctic Goddess
'sounds like the liquor talking.' 'yeah, it probably is. all right, stop with the ears for a moment so i can lie down on this thing.' reliath stopped playing around with nathan's ears 'why don't you sleep on the bed?'
Campfire Light
Maybe talking about it could clear up some of these feelings?" i offered carefully, since it didn't seem like he was going to try to go back to sleep very soon. he closed his eyes and sighed, ready to unload whatever this was.
Venom: Beautiful Killers, Part 3
The atmosphere is almost unbearably loud with music and conversation, but is relatively friendly.
The Chains of the Blood, chapter 3: Consultation
She adjusted herself so that she was facing me, she was clearly quite eager for a conversation with me. "hickory town is a small town, not quite as big as philadelphia, however it's still growing." i explained.
A Tale of Two Foxes
Laranian you're speaking?"
Trade: Paint Under Light
Instead of asking what you were talking about i kind of just made my assumptions and walked away. gotta say though, even for this city you're a dynamo i wasn't expecting." the photographer beamed, "i'm very passionate about my art!
Rogue Wind - The Four Cities
The one conversation which popped up the most besides books though was probably about having a child and what age they should have one.
Camping
"What time is it? We've been out here a while." "The sun hasn't even set yet! Sounds like it's nap time for the little German Shepherd pup." "No, I mean, I was just asking." "You're nervous, I can tell. Is this your first time in the forest?"...
The Adventures of Dingo Dan - Christmas Special Pt#1
Rick told the werewolf cop, starting a conversation between the two of them, as dan and kraig watched the sunset slowly fade below the horizon. "oh, kraig, i almost forgot, check out what rick gave me!"
Rogue Wind - The Nobles
I guess the only other thing i have to add is that i feel a tad guilty at times on how anything i write is heavy in dialogue and lacking everywhere else.
Academ: Prologue
I won't tell you anything else because i want you to hear it from others even if you're not talking, even if you're just hearing it but with that, you should be able to find something great."