Jack's Tail: Chapter-11 Escape
Chapter 11: Escape The next morning I've got another language lesson like everyday I've been here. Time constraints limit the lesson to a couple more words before we have to get ready for 'work', also like every day I have been here. I put on my...
Section 12
Once I made up my mind I quickly covered my track but left very subtle clues. Either way I knew that she's going to do everything she can to prove me wrong. Considering that's what I'm hoping for, that's sorta why I've been pushing her so hard. For the...
Section 17
After a week of traveling we entered the forest that was behind the old lab. An hour later we reached the tunnel Luna and I used for our escape years ago. I had Luna and the children to hide out in the tunnel while I scouted the property. Where I...
Section 16
"That's the last of them everyone and now I can truly relax after all this time. Let's hope the park rangers that're on patrol at this hour haven't come across anything." I said. "Not to be the negative one dad but, can we trust that they won't...
Section 15
What assurance do I have that this location isn't some kind of death trap?" Admiral asked. Zero was quick to tell him to double check on his tablet if he didn't believe him. Doing exactly as my husband suggested and confirmed the coordinates he gave....
Section 14
"Do you want me to define that question with an answer child of mine?" I countered. When I looked over my shoulder at her she didn't bother to give me a response. As we continued moving north towards the preserves boundaries to find breakfast. Taking a...
Section 13
**(****Fifteen years later)** For the past twenty five years I've been through a lot and endured much. Ranging from a freak accident, transformation, military test subject and a parent. My birth/human name was Devin Sentry and according to the US...
Section 18
I watched them get into their cars, start the engines then slowly drove away. Why would Sierra go out of her way to track down all the people I worked with? Instead of wondering to myself I decided to wait for Sierra and get some answers. Hopefully...
The boy with the Wolf Eyes 2
\*\*\*time lapse\*\*\* i was walking down a cobblestone street beside captain komamura, who was back in his helmet, heading toward shinigami academy. it was a peaceful, pleasant day as we made our way.
Writing Tips
My usual habit is to use single spaces for small time gaps or action shifts, double spaces for a scene change or larger time lapse, and double spaces with an indent and bolded first word for large time lapses.
The Serpent Curse - Chapter 10
Australian outback - time-lapse joey travels across the outback, critter scurrying alongside him. intercut with: ext. australian jungle - day the serpent is inside of the jungle.
Forgotten - Ch 1: Re-Learning (Edited)
\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* time lapse 1.5hrs it is now 10:00pm \*