Commissions Available - $$$ for the Bills (8/7/2022)
. \* i do previews, however, so if you'd like multiple sneak peeks of you work for revision and for your input, i'll gladly send you some previews for you to enjoy and give your input into.
Writing Commissions Available (8/3/2022)
. \* i do previews, however, so if you'd like multiple sneak peeks of you work for revision and for your input, i'll gladly send you some previews for you to enjoy and give your input into.
Shadow Warrior: The Great Enemy - Ch.1 revised
I tweaked and revised everything and putting more details around the characters. shadow warriors chapter 1: the calling created by: cjdstruction the world is gone to the brink of war, my world.
Preview of My First Story
Do remember that this is 'very early' 'first draft' style, so the quality may not be perfect, and there are some revisions i do want to make to it. but i'd like to hear feedback and see what you think of it, whether you like the characters (or not!)
To Know When to Fold 'em
They covered most factual topics one could think of - encyclopedias, almanacs, manuals, annuals, self-help guides, revision material, world record logs and pub trivia.
To Know When to Fold ‘em
They covered most factual topics one could think of - encyclopedias, almanacs, manuals, annuals, self-help guides, revision material, world record logs and pub trivia.
A Matter of Pride
Since i'm busy with the book revision, i decided to go back to the writing group prompts to help stay active and give you something to look over in the meantime.
Breaking the Barrier: Chapter 9
And if it doesn't, guess who's going to be doing the revisions. if you said me, give yourself a bucking cookie. i stand from my chair and stretch, hearing several pops and feeling some stress melt away.
The Stray Cat, Ch. 2
Afterward, we would meet back at the abandoned building, or "hideout" as our still-superhero-infatuated selves liked to call it, to share the new intelligence with each other, and revise our plans.
That Burning Sensation
Wouldnt post this if i didnt feel bad about waiting so long to get it out but its something i will post the final version when i post the next chapter this chapter will be revised and expanded
Contest Entry: Tron Skates (Gluepaw)
He even went out of his way to help carlson revise his blueprints to correspond with the updated shoe, along with pointing out specific areas that would allow augmentation - stating that a device placed anywhere else would cause severe discomfort or the automation
Don't Need to Be Afraid
The story you see here is actually a revised version of the one on fanfiction.net. i made grammatical corrections, made the sentences flow better, and overall just tweaked and fixed a bunch of things in it that bothered me.