Vanguards of the mine
Now in front of the wall to breach the katk squad is preparing and revising its equipment. shield and protek making sure their armor is fitted correctly and that the counterweight arm for their shield is calibrated for combat.
I Surrender (SFW)
When i'd returned to the fandom, and started sharing revisions of my old stories, it only seemed fair that the very first story i'd written got remastered first.
The Stray Cat, Ch. 4
I had to do a fair amount of revising in this one (which was all deleted because i'm a noob at this site so i had to do it all again), but i think it's much improved now. enjoy! i forced myself to open my eyes.
The Cannon of Civilization
Didn't really revise it that i can remember. i just figured i'd put it somewhere instead of letting it fester in my documents folder for the rest of eternity. :p i dunno. if you like it, say so.
The Creation Of Xrohne Chapter #1
If you are reading this currently, forget about this chapter, and read chapter #1 revised, that's the better of the two, sorry if it caused any inconvenience
Pride Podcast
"give me a break liberal, don't you have history to revise?" "yeah chase, won't you say that sydney and tj are just really good friends?" carl said, pretty much cackling.
Longing
After some revising done this morning, i've created a story in my own little world that you can now explore (though i use the word little loosely here).
Valkyrie - Book 1 -Chapter 8 - Flashback (Revised Edition)
#8 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 8 - flashback location: helfhiem (gateway, homeworld) - on the edge of terran space, before the "great scar" approximately 300 years ago it was raining on
not so quite romantic first date, part 2
Know ive put this off for a long time and well a lot of things have happened that is changing the story as well the main character is gonna be my characters new update who is an otterfox cameron is going to be called isaac and is a tolf also i will be revising
Chapter 1: A Discordant Melody
I have taken the time to proofread and make a few light revisions to reduce redundancies and remove contradictions, but there will still be errors.
Ceryx Expedition Species Log #2: Royals (Addendum article#1)
A quick refresher of their revised description will be provided. the "royals" as it has been heard they refer to themselves. stand on average 10-12 feet tall with 3 pairs of arms and legs.
Commissions Available - $$$ for the Bills (8/7/2022)
. \* i do previews, however, so if you'd like multiple sneak peeks of you work for revision and for your input, i'll gladly send you some previews for you to enjoy and give your input into.