Writing Tips
Also, whenever you have dialog sections, insert a paragraph or at least a line break between the speakers. example: "how did you know it was me?" asked john. sally smiled.
A First Time for Everything
Still, she wanted to commit at least the basic details to memory—and there were a _lot_ of basic details.
Dimensional Balance Chapter 17: Scars of Betrayal
He took a deep breath, the scent of pure, clean water, dropping at least five stories to a thunderous landing, felt cleansing.
The Primal Betreyal #01
At least the only one, that he remembered.
Spyro's Old Flame: Chapter 6 - Not on the List
At least he could wallow in his misery in peace. for a second, he wondered if the large purple dragon had actually been spyro after all. he looked so very different. but he knew it was spyro.
Only Human (Revised), Chapter 2
More comfort than anything else in this forsaken pit, at least. in the two days since waking, the only interaction he had was with the machine that brought his meals, and the woman. he assumed, at least, it was a woman.
Clown Mare 8-3
I just wish they love the rain at least for once. at least some of the commoners love the rain so much for their crops to grow." * * * "princess silver rain. do please come here." "mom, i don't want to go outside. it's hot and dry weather.
No More Monday Memos
"not a jackpot, but at least breakfast. twenty-five bucks, if i may, billie."
Dynasty: Origins, Act 02: Colored Crimson
At least, none of my wishes come true.
Unspoken
His status had at least some benefits he could privately enjoy. he closed a curtain over his port lite and feel into a solemn sleep. finally his mind at ease with the thought of tanith.
Cubnapped
I poke the doorbell and at least an eight tone chime rings through the house. a tall, muscular border collie answers the door. he was at least 6' 8" to my 6' somewhat lean frame.
More Than A Monster - Chapter Eighteen
And at least here though the roads were dirty and smudged with soil, at least they were not covered with slime and algae. granted, some of those alleyways i’d run through had been, but here the road was warm and smooth.