Green: Time's End (prologue)
All i know is that i've been practicing a lot and i hope i show at least some improvement. chapters will be much longer than this one, it's only a prologue after all.
The Life of Another - Chapter 6
Once again my mood improved substantially on a full stomach. in my foul temper earlier i had pulled open the refrigerator door so jarringly that it sent the contents spilling onto the floor.
The Life of Another - Chapter 42 (partial)
(folds ears apologetically) my idea was to return to writing after taking some time off to focus on improving my health. unfortunately, the completion of that goal has thus-far eluded me. :( that said, i wanted to at least get this portion uploaded.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 4: Hunt
It makes my body ideal for strength training, by increasing my oxygen capacity, thus improving my overall endurance, as well as improving my metabolism, so my breakdown of food is more efficient.
Surrender: Chapter 1
Her grades had improved a lot, but earning her way into the same kinds of universities kenny could go to was almost impossible for her at this point. almost. “kenny… you shouldn’t worry about that.
The Office Rat
Unfortunately, things did not improve at the office.
Integration: Part Eleven
I've actively striven to improve, but i won't specify what's been targeted for improvement. if you notice it, do say, especially if you feel they're actual improvements, or actually seem to drag my writing down.
Aftermath chapter 1: wake up
Please tell me how i can improve future chapters and i'll try my best to improve. also, did you notice that the name of the military base "greikoi" is the greek word for origin? i think its fitting considering that this is the first chapter.
Slag ND7 : Zombie Bite
He lifted his arm up, in an attempt to dislodge it but it held on tight, "well it's certainly improved." he said looking at the ghoul hanging onto his arm with just its mouth.
Hatchlings: Chapter 20
Aidey scowled, which didn't improve her mate's mood whatsoever. 'great... i'm up for a long talk with you after this passes, am i right..?' dehious said cautiously. 'you'd better hope for it to be short.' aidey retorted.
Rebirth ch18
You've really improved a lot. i can't believe some of the moves that you know now." suzy said as she picked up rupert, sat down with him in her lap, and proceeded to pet him from head to tail.
Comrade Riders, One: Major Event Callout
It has improved in stats as well aside the color; transmission kept at manual, improved horsepower and speed, increased velocity majorly, everything. mostly everything.