the storm of mind's
#6 of poem fate please comment so i can improve the storm throws me down. in side of my mind. for the chaous wont let me alone. my emotion are spikeing all over the place. were am i cant stand this. confusion at every trun. im so lost inside.
Moonless Night.
Please comment to let me know how i did, or how i can improve. ~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~ baying for my love. without a star in the sky, no moon to give light. sitting in the dark.
Wolfen - Chapter 15
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. as the friendly duel began at their camp, david grabbed the satchel that held karthan's soul stone and quietly slipped out behind the trees.
The Five Guides
One's goals and plans, whether open or hidden, should at worst never destroy or undermine the strength of the great dragon's cities, nations, or people, and at best should leave them improved, so that the great dragon may derive greater glory thereby.
Chapter XVI: Listen To The Wind Blow
Kaeden, for his part, had been making slow, but steady improvements.
The Origin of Shadow - Chapter 4
Try smelling something, or listening, because that first conversion was to improve your sense. go on, give it a try" i decided to humour him and try it, so i closed my eyes and focused on my sense of smell and hearing.
Passions Flames Pt 3: Training
Mistress eon said "i would like you to train thrisk for a week and a half, improve his endurance and reflexes for the most part." lucas nodded for a bit before whistling shrilly. the whistle hurt my ears and i couldn't help but shudder lightly.
Dragonball Z fanfic Chapter 3: Reunited for a moment
"you have improved old man!" flame said as the blasts canceled each other out, both of them standing tall and looking at one another.
Of Wolves and Foxes, Epilogue
"you're certainly improving quickly, aaron. i'm very impressed." the little fox's tail wagged happily. "i'm much better at vulpine." "you're better than i am, that's for sure.
Untitled Poem
Rescuer the one to clasp your hand and lift you off the spinning rock and clean you free of sand clock hands whirled like a top, a fire died, another grew a pair of dice through parallax, to view from heights the chance improved
Marriage
Still, he was improving. and devon knew it was time. so he sat on one knee, next to cameron. "cameron wilson, will you marry me?" cam was stunned. he then cried. "i do, i really do but a-are you sure about that?"
Soul Shattering Collapse - medium poem
You've done so much to improve, to keep yourself safe. just to watch if blow up in your face with a whoosh and shout you're back to square one, the beginning, to the place where you're a danger to yourself. written by: fane star