A song I wrote.
So this is a song which is critical of the us government. it follows the song the russians by sting.
The Governor and Her Shadow Chapter One
**criticism or feedback is appreciated! :)**
An A-pear-ent Issue
However, it was in sven's nature to always over-analyze things, once even leading him to criticize a pack of off-brand gummy worms at the dollar store for shoddy packaging.
Deception (Bread And Circuses)
Rebel, shoot deadly pin, terror spread by flag of false, feel the increase in your pulse, allow us to take care of you, for we know better than you do, your children are not yours to raise, a god you aren't allowed to praise, self-defense and critical
Priorities Upon Waking (Otherwise Untitled)
~ she chafed against the difficulty of de-tangling the mission parameter from amongst the nest of critical alerts and overdue notifications that were trying to intrude on her mind.
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
Please feel free to leave any comments, suggestions, observations, constructive criticisms, questions, and thoughts in the comment section.
GoM-Ep15-The Enemy Within-
He is known to be very blunt, critical and very self centered with a huge ego.
The Light and the Darkness of Humanity
Wow, this is pretty scary and inspirational at the same time. i don't mind any helpful criticism, so feel free to comment.
The Struggle Within
criticism,praise,etc. hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the eevee shivered in his sleep.not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago.
A Wolfs Howl
More writing hehe, i know i'm not the best writer here but ones heart should be more important then the content outputted, yet i do like constructive criticism.
The world has gone to hell]introduction/prolge
This is the first time i've ever writen anything for others to see.so cut me a little slack if the spelling is off.i have a bit of a short attention span,so the writing could take awhile.other then that be as critical as you want,i stopped caring what people
About: Shyness
Should i not be so offended and scared by criticism ? should i stop comparing myself to others ? should i stop trying to please everybody ? should i stop living for others' approval ? should i stop feeling myself so guilty for no reason ?