Amber Silverblood: Silverpack, Chapter Seven
The hours drifted by slowly, and the sun had long since sank below the horizon when i finally realized i'd been reading the same paragraph over and over again, and slapped the book shut.
Homework Cuddles
Tj played with his pencil a little, before quickly writting down a paragraph. "did i do good?" he asked sydney expectantly. "mostly good, though the conclusion is a bit off" the otter answered honestly.
A Day of Prayer
This is my first time writing something longer than like three paragraphs, haha, so it's probably terrible. don't take it too seriously. **chapter 1: the plan** achmed gazed out over the steppes as he sat in his foxhole.
Subdivisions
What i've found out is that this wolf's math skills are on par with an elementary schooler's and his inability to string coherent words together to form even a short paragraph, makes me highly question his literacy.
Hoping for Something, A prologue
Mine begins not where i stay and type this, and due to my obsessive hate of grammar rules without a half-inch indention at the beginning of the paragraph... nope, my story starts in alabama.
Two families, one pride
But what i mean is because of that my head hurts and this litle paragraph is being typed up at 2:45 in the morning. like simba used to in this story (hehe) i have trouble sleeping. but back to the story.
Cat Island, Chapter 1
Edited for clarity; i took out the large 'info dump' paragraph about the plan, should flow smoother now. chapter 1: stormclouds and mist mist, mist, and more mist. that was all she could see. an endless sea of fog, with no determinable end.
Making up(Chapter 28)
Actually, it's all happy except for maybe a few paragraphs. anyways, it's short, i know.
Ander - Part 2: Subchapter 26
Edit: i added a short paragraph right after sarah grabbed the railing just to make it perfectly clear that she managed to stop herself from falling at the last second (there were some people on other sites who thought she really did fall).
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
Now, from that last paragraph your thoughts may be to turn to the thesaurus and select as many new and interesting words to make your writing stronger and avoid tricksy adverbs slipping in (i'll stop with them, i promise).
The Mountain
Important: change your point of view with each paragraph. i was messing with things when doing this so it can be hard to read. the man woke up in his bed.
Choleric
He sat next to her, rotated her laptop around, and typed a paragraph on the blank page.