Mewtwo and Lucario
And please criticize me if you dislike the story! i need to become a better writer and criticizing is one of the only ways for me to get better. oh, and there may be a second part. still debating it with myself.** _
Red Roses mean love, White Doves peace: Srsly (6 Icons!)
Nobody knows what the hell they're doing in inserting symbolism, but if we listen to the various disciplines of criticism typically there is so much to it any author who's successfully applied it has carefully spent weeks and years with an itty-bitty notebook
(Dream Journal) Queen of the Gremlins
They said he was evil and critically needed to be forcibly converted into something "good". i persistently refused, feeling quite scared and protective as i rushed frantically to a closet with the creature.
Case File: 001
Salvage carrier operations critical to success of studies inside of therasphetamine. not enough clinical data to ensure success of therasphetamine, or establish effective dosage rates.
2 Voice
criticism? comment away! the mountain was to the west, giarien knew. in the forest, the foliage was too thick to see the great stony mass well. she had to look to tree moss for north and then reason that west was to the right.
The Lead Crown: Ch 4c, Reversal of Fortunes (Pt 2)
Alvis may be critically wounded or better. brother jessen may be critically wounded or better. alarice is in jeopardy. you only have until sunday, may 11th to vote for who you want to avoid being horribly maimed/mauled/harmed. thanks for reading!
The Mystic Sands | Chapter 2
He had every reason for such a critical and appraising glance, of course.
Zero Point: Chapter 2- Brave New World
Warning: power levels critical.
Pokemon - Tale Of The Guardian Master - CH 41
"the man looks to be in critical condition. if we don't get him into the city now he could be a goner." one of the officers muttered. "i suppose the pokemon is just doing its job... but we didn't bring anything to sedate it with though... should we...?"
Marshall's Love Adventure
It's my first time writing something major like this, so any constructive criticism is appreciated. anyway, stick around because this story will take a while. :) part 2 coming out soon. disclaimer: i do not own paw patrol and this is simply for fun.
Wolviex
If you have ideas to help make this backstory a bit smoother, i'm more then eager to accept criticism, and ideas!_
4 Voice
criticism? comment away :3 "to the mountain, child. there, destiny lies." giarien regretting sleeping on the branch. she had perched the whole night, a skill that many dragons and avians had, and her legs were sore.