A song I wrote.
So this is a song which is critical of the us government. it follows the song the russians by sting.
Dusk's Adventure day 3
\*he uses drill rush landing a critical hit\* dusk: \*he uses brutal swing on shield again landing a critical hit\* shield: \*seems nearly defeated\* okay, i give! you win... dusk: thanks, can you get up? shield: yeah.
The orphaned Riolu chapter 1
Another critical, riolu falls onto his knees and gets up riolu then tries to use hand to hand combat or paw to paw combat in this case on his opponent but the opponent dodges every time, riolu gets struck by a wing attack and it scores a critical hit, riolu's
GoM-Ep15-The Enemy Within-
He is known to be very blunt, critical and very self centered with a huge ego.
The Light and the Darkness of Humanity
Wow, this is pretty scary and inspirational at the same time. i don't mind any helpful criticism, so feel free to comment.
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
Please feel free to leave any comments, suggestions, observations, constructive criticisms, questions, and thoughts in the comment section.
Deception (Bread And Circuses)
Rebel, shoot deadly pin, terror spread by flag of false, feel the increase in your pulse, allow us to take care of you, for we know better than you do, your children are not yours to raise, a god you aren't allowed to praise, self-defense and critical
Priorities Upon Waking (Otherwise Untitled)
~ she chafed against the difficulty of de-tangling the mission parameter from amongst the nest of critical alerts and overdue notifications that were trying to intrude on her mind.
An A-pear-ent Issue
However, it was in sven's nature to always over-analyze things, once even leading him to criticize a pack of off-brand gummy worms at the dollar store for shoddy packaging.
The Struggle Within
criticism,praise,etc. hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the eevee shivered in his sleep.not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago.
A Wolfs Howl
More writing hehe, i know i'm not the best writer here but ones heart should be more important then the content outputted, yet i do like constructive criticism.
The world has gone to hell]introduction/prolge
This is the first time i've ever writen anything for others to see.so cut me a little slack if the spelling is off.i have a bit of a short attention span,so the writing could take awhile.other then that be as critical as you want,i stopped caring what people