#45 of astral high
i'd like to know how you guys feel about this chapter specifically, interesting? yes, no? lost all interest in the story and unsubscribed?
i woke up on a couch to see seth's now distorted face looking down on me.
Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid, Hyena, Magic, Otter, Wolf, Zebra
#44 of astral high
hmm... there are too many fricking chapters in this story. i haven't gotten feedback in a while, anyone have any thoughts about this story?
"okay, so only jeran, garrick, alex, and titus connected, right?"
Avian, Folf, Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid, Hyena, Magic, Otter, Wolf, Zebra, fusky
#37 of astral high
hm. so, out of curiosity, how do you guys feel about this sudden change in story?
i walked into advisory with a sense of confusion and amazement.
Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hyena, Magic, Wolf
#26 of astral high
this story seems to be getting less... morally acceptable. eh, that's public school for you. i mean, how else would i know how to properly use the f word? or any other swear word for that matter?
Albino, Avian, Dragon, Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid, Hyena, Otter
#19 of astral high
i've found the problem with chapter length. i base it proportionate to the scroll bar [in ms word] in a very inaccurate manner.
Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid, Otter, Zebra
#12 of astral high
so... i still want feedback. you know, to those of you are reading this but aren't saying anything. you know, just a reminder that feedback would be amazing. hear the thu'um of my fellow furs and what not. gods i'm a nerd.
Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid
#9 of astral high
yeah... this is a shorter chapter... however, it's much more... plot effecting. hooray for rising action! :p
i raced in the front door, where my parents were calmly sitting down to eat dinner.
Folf, Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Lion, Otter, Zebra
#8 of astral high
oh how wonderful it is to work with these characters again...
life is good. life is a wonderful thing given to us by god. at least that's what my parents would say. i don't care. i love them. and apparently, they love me back.
Folf, Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Hybrid, Otter, Zebra
#3 of astral high
this was uploaded like... five hours later than i meant to. pay no attention to my forming addiction to tes...
Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Otter, Zebra
#2 of astral high
huh. i just realized that this is going to be the longest chapter in this story...
morning came early. i don't care if it was eleven thirty, it felt more like six thirty. well, no. waking up at six leaves me with little sleep.
Elder Scrolls, Fox, Gay, Gay Relationships, Otter, Teenagers, Zebra, glowing
"so what did you do this time," she said barely able to stifle her laughter at her prone brother, "you look like you had quite a flight,"
"grrrrrr, the catalysts are not holding," he said a bit of anger in his tone, "the portal spell that got us to the astral
Character Development, Dragon, Dragoness, Magic, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Sorrow, Story Progression, Story Series
Sometimes it was a month before wynn used astral projection to reach them. other times, it was an entire year. time was different in the fox kingdom. kilyan had to keep telling himself that. still, it didn't make him stop missing his wynn.
Love, M/F/F, Maned Wolf, Wolf