The Raven's Shadow, Chapter 2
I consider it to still be in rough draft form, so tell me all the things i did wrong. i personally feel my diologue is fairly atrocious. i am also considering changing the name, since i have altered my idea on where things are going.
a painful memory...(my first big story idea)
#1 of mine author's note: please keep in mind that this is a rough draft for the intro to a story im working on. the main characters are a pair of twin snow leopards. feel free to let me know what you think about it. its one of my first major story ideas
Lost Pokemon Episodes: Episode 2
Since this is a rough draft, no asking to borrow content at this time. ver 1.0 title: the lost pokemon episodes.
Snowlit Dawn - Book 2 Chapter 10
This was a me problem - mainly a combination of motivation to actually sit down and edit my rough draft, and having a few more recent unexpected (but overall good) developments at work.
The Pool (Art + Story)
I recently did this illustration in my sketchbook to practice character interaction, and ended up liking the scene so much that i decided to write a rough draft of short story about it.
Lost Pokemon Episodes: Episode 3
Since this is a rough draft, no asking to borrow content at this time. ver 1.0 title: the lost pokemon episodes.
Tuff Ch. 3
Hi, this is my rough draft of chapter 3 of tuff. i did my best ironing out spelling and grammar issues but if you find any please let me know! ^-^ if you like it or have any comments please let me know. if you think i can improve let me know. thanks!
Making Tracks (full version)
And here's the unedited, rough draft version of the story i had written. at about 1,200 it was definitely too long for the contest, so i had to pare it down a bit. editing is hard! i still kind like this one better...
The Dragon Prince: Preview
I'm pouring a lot of time and effort into writing this novel, but instead of going on without giving you guys any sort of updates, i figured i could throw a bone here and give a short preview in the form of a rough draft of the book's prologue!
Ranoria: As Fates Collide
While i did post this it is meant to be a rough draft open to changes because, as again, this is the first story i have ever written.
new year, new life chapter 4
#3 of new year, new life **told you the next one would be up quickly, to be honest i've finished the story as a rough draft but i'm waiting for feed back before i do each section. also check out my nice fancy tags!
Dante, Origins Chapter 3: Always Read the Fine Print
This bunny loves feedback and this is just a rough draft. so please contact me with any comments, suggestions, plot holes, problems, errors at [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) constructive criticism only.