Hunted, Part 3: Dinosaur Scat & Target Abduction
it's my first time writing it, so don't be surprised if it's shit-tier (pun not intended, heh.). mark gets shat on by a dinosaur; several other creatures get shat on by the same dinosaur. there's some plot-relevant drama, too!
A New World, A New Beginning
Hopefully it isnt too bad since its my first story so but if you comment on it, i ask that they be comments in how the story can be improved, please dont tell me how much it sucks or that you didnt like reading.
Fursonalized, Chapter 1 - Teenage Dream
it's my first piece of furry fiction ever, but i invite critiques, as i would love to improve my writing.
Take The Bait
it's my first day here." "oh, that's where i'm heading now." he said. "follow me. are you a freshman?" "no, i'm a transfer student." i said as we began walking. "ah, i see. so what class is up first for you?"
Bad Time For Fools
it's my first time writing something like this. plus it's different from the stuff i normally write here. hope all who read it enjoy.
The New Guy.
I know its not perfect but its my first time writting yiff so :p hope you like it. edit: 14/july/10 : corrected alot of errors.
That Husky Can Dance!
\>"...yeah, it's my first time." today you found out that you are a spineless shit, provided the puppy eyes are big enough. \>"yay!" she spreads her arms and jumps, and then immediately looks back at you to see if it made you any happier.
Pitch Episode 9: Under wheel
"it's my first time driving without my dad," i said. "well you're better at it than me," he said. day 4 we drove none stop. i don't think wes or i were willing to let russell take the wheel even after he sobered up.
Sky
#1 of sky it's my first time so please tell me how i did prologue times change and as always we have shitty things happen. we must adapt or suffer the consequences. the things that make us who we are and what we do determines our fate.
Filling the Void - Chapter Eleven
"it's my first day of school," victus said, earnestly. "i don't want to be late for my first day of school!" his expression became worried. "what if they talk about dinosaurs and i'm not there?" dagen didn't want to smile.
Letters from the Heart
it. my first day in the city. i know it's not a very big city, but it was big enough for a small town girl. it also wasn't really my first day. the sun was setting when i pulled off the highway.
Alternate Universe | PT 1
Don't expect much, it's my first story.... the title will make sense if i finish the series. p.s. look for the references and see if you can spot them and point them out in the comments! it may be a quote, or a description. all depends!