Something is wrong in the world today. Part 2
This part i had to do all on my own, leafykins didn't want to rewrite it with me. but it is all well and good. i had fun retyping this up. oh ya just to give you guys' heads up on a few things. 1. when a dragon cries he will die. 2.
Hunting Death- First One
If i were to rewrite some of the later dialogs i'd probably bring back more of that **first one** "ugh, that was certainly fun," i remark dryly to myself while considering my options. making a bolt for it would do me no good.
Binary Genetics, Chapter 1
"given a specific chemical trigger, the underlying dna would become active and rewrite the test subject's base dna. over a period of approximately two weeks, the test subject would regenerate into another creature." "this is idiotic."
As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
. ---- that means you can do whatever the hell you want with srsly, from ripping it off entirely to 'quoting' it in your own guide to rewriting it.
Read Harry Potter, the Aenid of our times: Srsly (4 real!)
. ---- that means you can do whatever the hell you want with srsly, from ripping it off entirely to 'quoting' it in your own guide to rewriting it.
Chapter 3
Not horribly happy with the pacing, but one of these days i may get around to rewriting it. they arrived at the castle at the end of the second week.
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 34: Bugg3d Pr0gr4m
The voljoi somehow managed to comply and alvin quickly modified the diagnostic port assembly to suit his needs, rewriting internal code in the cell before sabotaging the safety protocols.
Fallout - Prologue
#1 of fallout okay, this is the beginning of my rewrite of aftermath.... okay, this is the beginning of my rewrite of aftermath.
Isolation-Excerpt-24-Error Code
Which means if i wanted to make the check transmission lights on the generators come on from my tablet, i would have to rewrite the operating system on my tablet." "a simple no would suffice", sarah retorted, "what else?
Recoil: Chapter 2, Advocate
Hell, they might even need to rewrite the constitution after all this" by now he had his jacket off, exposing his midsection, which made the blood go to my cheeks. i avert end my eyes, not wanting him to get the wrong idea. i slumped in my seat. wow...
The Dark Streets - Reboot Preview
#1 of the dark streets i came back to the project i'd abandoned, and decided it was time to rethink the first few chapters, and to rewrite out a lot of the small errors i'd made.
Starts Here
#1 of love and deception -first story, be nice... i had to rewrite this after i accidently clicked a wrong button t\_t- it all started on the first day of ninth grade high school, first year...