The reason I live.
Please give me some pointers i love feedback. sorry if you find this to be utter garbage, i personally do a bit, but like i said wanted a second opinion. another day, just put on a smile. make a joke to keep up appearances.
Poem: descent into madness
This is a piece of poetry i wrote once while depressed, if i get enough feedback i might consider uploading my other poetry as well, and dont worry none of them are as moody as this one, im more of a love poem writer :p i lay in bed another sleepless night
Differences
This is my first short story just meant to show the differences of life i hope you enjoy it and please after reading can you leave feedback it would be greatly appreciated.
You are my...
I hope you'll enjoy it and feedback are more than welcome :)! love yourself!
A Special Night
This is just a test story that i wrote, please leave your feedback! first story, yay ^^ also, if i get enough positive comments, i will continue this story, promise ^^ "welcome home, hun. how was work?"
For These Things I Cry
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication.
Can I Tell You Something?
I hope you enjoy, feedback is always appreciated. **can i tell you something?** can i tell you something?
Writing practise #1 - Cold night
I'd appreciate any feedback. the text is intentionally short and given without context. i may continue to write on it later though to give it context.
Moving On
Would still like some feedback! :3 the pain, the anguish. he pushed it aside, surprising himself. a single tear dropped, yet again unheard as it splashed into the pool. "a pool of... my tears?" he said aloud, jumping at the sound.
sonic the adventures: chapter 1
Comment down below and give me your feedback should i make the chapters longer? ok sonic out!
Towers of Seshin: Part 3
He felt pain surge through him; magical feedback. it occurred when something that the mage was trying to control was more powerful than the mage itself.
Astral High - Chapter 11
I still want feedback. you know, to those of you are reading this but aren't saying anything. you know, just a reminder that feedback would be amazing. hear the thu'um of my fellow furs and what not. gods i'm a nerd.