The reason I live.
Please give me some pointers i love feedback. sorry if you find this to be utter garbage, i personally do a bit, but like i said wanted a second opinion. another day, just put on a smile. make a joke to keep up appearances.
Poem: descent into madness
This is a piece of poetry i wrote once while depressed, if i get enough feedback i might consider uploading my other poetry as well, and dont worry none of them are as moody as this one, im more of a love poem writer :p i lay in bed another sleepless night
Differences
This is my first short story just meant to show the differences of life i hope you enjoy it and please after reading can you leave feedback it would be greatly appreciated.
You are my...
I hope you'll enjoy it and feedback are more than welcome :)! love yourself!
A Special Night
This is just a test story that i wrote, please leave your feedback! first story, yay ^^ also, if i get enough positive comments, i will continue this story, promise ^^ "welcome home, hun. how was work?"
For These Things I Cry
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication.
Can I Tell You Something?
I hope you enjoy, feedback is always appreciated. **can i tell you something?** can i tell you something?
Writing practise #1 - Cold night
I'd appreciate any feedback. the text is intentionally short and given without context. i may continue to write on it later though to give it context.
Moving On
Would still like some feedback! :3 the pain, the anguish. he pushed it aside, surprising himself. a single tear dropped, yet again unheard as it splashed into the pool. "a pool of... my tears?" he said aloud, jumping at the sound.
sonic the adventures: chapter 1
Comment down below and give me your feedback should i make the chapters longer? ok sonic out!
Astral High - Chapter 11
I still want feedback. you know, to those of you are reading this but aren't saying anything. you know, just a reminder that feedback would be amazing. hear the thu'um of my fellow furs and what not. gods i'm a nerd.
Stork Inc. [Archives]
This is a literary experiment and open to feedback on refinement and continual ideas. plumes of white smoke were being pumped out by several spires, bouncing up and down as they vivaciously pushed out the benign emissions.