Chapter 3 fall of man dawn of a new age Rewrite by Raven Fox
"yeah joe, it's like the 1940's, guys are doing the burial detail and the women, are running the store's and businesses that are ok to run at the moment." shelly answered looking at joe. "what are you stuck with?"
Chimera - Chapter 8
Among the details he distinguished were his belly which seemed snug to him, his nasal ring which could have used as a knocker, and his ruffled hair to the air of a bush. for the feline, no doubt: he is atypical, this man.
True to Form: Part Twelve
Soon, detail work is added. swift washes of color are scattered everywhere. skillful twists of the brush insert bright reds and greens and blues everywhere. then, life. "woah."
Ember Tails info sheet
#9 of ember tails world-building is always something i enjoy, but sometimes (more often than i would like) there are details of the world that i feel are important to know for the story (and some details that are just fun) but are really hard to work into
Insole exploration
The insole of the footwear was so heavily worn that you could make out the exact details of his foot upon it, including the heavy impressions of the toe and ball of his foot.
Chapter 19 -- Inquiry
"shannon had well founded reasons for being covert during this event, serious enough that she did not share with me any of the details until after it was over.
The Life of Another - Chapter 29
We'll take care of this but in return we'll be expecting sordid details! sordid i tell you!" p.o.v. - roger - medical department "jack, consider me duly impressed; now go towel off. the ice on your fur is starting to melt."
musket prologue: chapter 3,
After bloody detail. i have talked to the preacher that visits and i have prayed to god, begging him to make all of the dreams stop, but with all of this the only thing i recieve is more dreams and silence. why is it that one man who has never prayed once
The elements
In my next submission, i'll cover the primary elements in more detail.
Through Hell and Back: Prologue: WAR!
I'm also requesting feedback on details on the next chapters. if you donn't tell me what you liked or disliked, i can't make this any better. tell me if there is too much or too little detail or if the story needs to speed up or slow down.
Alex Skunk
I was having trouble with key details of why i was here, but the end result was the same; i was in the forest. oh, it was green and brown in ways you'd never seen.
The worst day ever
And you will not jump detail "-said while lying on the bed-" \* gulp \* ehehe if i tell you everything "- i said softly while i was nervous- "i heard you" - said my friend scared me making me almost fall of the bed for the surprise - "quiet i'll keep it a