"Hmmm." I studied my ceiling with great consideration. It seemed to be as dark and dank as the rest of my shitty loft. I looked around the stark one room apartment and tried to visualize it being anything but a shithole with a bed and clock. No such...
Female, No-Yiff, Realistic, Tigress
description of sinopa halwn=
sinopa is a red-fox furry. she has blonde mid-back hair and golden eyes. label: new girl/prep.
description of ari myron=
ari is a lion furry. he has shoulder-length brown hair and hazel eyes.
Dragon, Fox, Kangaroo, Lion, Nanohaybugcha, School
The trick is to strike a balance in how much description you have. you want to avoid being overly descriptive, as blow by blow gets old really fast. however, you also need to give your readers a good idea of what is happening.
Advice, Help, No-Yiff, Stories, Writers block, writing, writing skills
The second tells you, but also provides a description. the third merely tells you. most of the time, you'll hear it is better to show rather than tell.
Advice, Help, No-Yiff, tips, writing
I am making a story and i am going to use other peoples fursonas if you want to try out leave a description
this will be a story about war and mercinairies so in description leave;
name
rank
specialty like sniper assault other describe please
three
Mercinairies, War, volunteer
#2 of paradise café
name: drake
species: dragon
gender: male
type: mana (most general, it influece everything except the mage)
magic: the dealer
age: 17
physical description:
a black scaled dragon.
Character Development, Dragon, Gay
Character description:
mike is very shy and wouldn't go anywhere witout his boyfriend (next chapter). the truth is that he isn't shy or anything, he just suffers of double personality.
Character Development, Double personality, Gay, Tiger
"if it was any other cat, i wouldn't put much weight on that, but miss tabatha was very descriptive. m'sure she wouldn't leave a detail like that out." she'd smile and look up.
Cat, Death, Emotion, Mouse, Prey, Rat, Sorrow, predator