The Temeraire

Biometric, genetic, and neurologic security systems are installed in all critical areas of the ship to prevent theft, including all control consuls.

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Poem #11: Words

#11 of poetry critical thinking about human use and connotation of words themselves. wrote it in (not for) english class junior year. _words_ what are words written across the page? what emotions are written into these words?

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For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul

You are strong within, my heart know that, forever, i'll be your guard construcitve criticism appreciated. however remember, this was my first poem ever so don't tear me into pieces because it is bad or something.

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Poem #9: The Question Why

#9 of poetry a poem about critical thinking in regards to the why of life, and all its contradictions.

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A Silent Soul- Chapter 1

Feel free to leave a comment with constructive criticism, or just say if you liked it! or not! totally up to you! other than that, i think it's time to go! bye! ^\_^

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Chapter Thirteen

Don't forget leave a comment, feedback, and criticism. enjoy! ian p.o.v _i can't believe they would send her to retrieve me!

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Friends, Lovers, Partners ~ Prologue

As this is my first submission, and comments and criticism are welcome. vote or fave if it pleases you to do so.

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Men vs Women

Women criticize unfairly. a man is the boss. a woman is just bossy. men are confident. a woman is opinionated and pushy. men are leaders. women need to be led. men speak the truth. women unfairly accuse the "innocent."

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Poem #19: Yo Pense (I Thought)

Its about reflection and critical thinking of the world around us. i've included the english translation.

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leave me be. poem

I don't half to take your criticism. because your hypocrisy is bigger than the usa. you just drive me to the brink to where i want to brake your face. if you can't handle this fate then change it your way.

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The Mourning After - Chapter 24 (More Q's than A's)

I am at a critical point in my training where i need to learn to totally suppress and control the spirit or..." his statement didn't need to be finished. we all knew what would happen. this was the reason he couldn't stay here in zangar.

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Jecht's Story

Jecht was often criticized for being a flaming hot-head. but it was not a good day to be a criticizer. hell, said criticizers were flying out the bar window now.

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