The Fall of the Elvish Kingdom
Gradually his memories were erased and rewritten: his name was not kalangor, but khraggör, he was not the prince of any elvish kingdom, but the chief of an orcish tribe, he was even aspiring to become the new orc king, always under the command of his master
Book One of Rabbits Part 1 of 29 "The Fingerprint Of Nature's Breath?"
You've rewritten much better than this, and the last had no rope in it. fix our young archivist's errors for tonight's dream. the anomaly should be visiting him, and we best keep him hard and sensitive if it's to happen with her."_ "_okay, eth'dolamere.
Hero, Chapter 3 - A Book
#4 of hero i decided to do a full re-upload because this chapter was entirely rewritten! keep in mind that there may be some discrepancies between this and the following chapters which haven't been revised.
Jeremy 022; Moves With A Slide And Rhythm
While i've used a few bits and pieces most of the story has been rewritten after the first couple chapters. its also taken more than a few different directions than the first run although there seem to be more similarities than differences to me.
The Cerebral Corporate Cortex
"look into this--" the blue light of the medallion was piercing and the skunk felt his past being rewritten, and his understanding of the future shifting, the squeaky and meek voice of the mouse suddenly felt full of authority and control and the agent hung
Secrets Ch. 10
The dead don't care about the concerns of the living and the past can't be rewritten." my tone must have taken her by surprise because her expression quickly changes to one of slight shock, "that is a bit cold don't you think?"
The Other Side Of Summer V: Graham's Story
Laws had to be rewritten, and new prejudices had to be quickly overcome for those randomly selected by whatever had caused this change. it was in late june, not long after he had finished third grade.
Baseball in Winter 2 (redux)
#2 of baseball in winter (redux) the continuation of baseball in winter, the rewritten version. i'm rewriting the this story to get back in the mindset of writing! :3 ciyter servayed the lunch room, checking each of the tables to find his friends.
Salaceon Tales
Though, hell if i really know what's going on outside my little hometown... the name is not important, hell none of the names of the towns in salaceon are important...mostly because i can't ever remember them (remember that these were rewritten multiple times
Strong Wolf Chronicles part 6 - Unidentified
"eventually, the genetic code chris got from me will be completely rewritten with that of the people and pokemon he interacts with, but unless he purposefully gives himself bad dna, he'll be fine.
Counter Earth Chronicles Chapter 142: That Which Survives (All Of Our Tomorrows Were Yesterday Part Four)
As we speak her dna is being rewritten, you will be transforming into something you hate very much- one of us._ the goat said glaring at the mother indignantly.
Through Hell [10]
A similar scene happened in the last draft, but considering i've changed motivations and backstories, this chapter had to be completely rewritten as well. still, the whole chapter was two people just...talking. i hope it wasn't too dry haha.